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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though I love it when the story focuses on Claudius, be careful not to make him MORE important than Marcus/Armor, and ESPECIALLY not Xavier/Sex/Azrael. They were there first!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv it u mean tease
giving us a little then leaving
i luv it i want more
so good like chippies ur chappies
u cant just have one
mmmmm
need more
have a lovely holiday
giving us a little then leaving
i luv it i want more
so good like chippies ur chappies
u cant just have one
mmmmm
need more
have a lovely holiday
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clove : Book 4 of Lord Emperor Vampire Series
Chapter 1
LOVE IT!
It's so romantic.
You made me cry. (Four tissues.)
Can't wait to find out what they did
to Xavier.
LOVE IT!!
Thanks,
R
Chapter 1
LOVE IT!
It's so romantic.
You made me cry. (Four tissues.)
Can't wait to find out what they did
to Xavier.
LOVE IT!!
Thanks,
R
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Well. Guess I'm going to put out an unpopular opinion. I really like the direction this one's headed in....sunshine and daisies it is not. I probably would have been disappointed with an easy resolution. Can't wait to see what's going to happen!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww.....that's sad!! and i hope that's not X or any of the brothers doing the killing of the blues.....i think it was blues...
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven't spoken up in a long time. But I have to say I like it.
I was shocked to see that you had started Book 4 after saying that we would have to wait.
I have been reading and rereading your Vampire Series and I have to say I Love them all. I Love your characters and your story lines.
I just have one question. When are you gonna get these stories published. I would like to be able to purchase copies so I can read them all the time without having to go online.
As for your opening prologue for Book 4 for of the Lord Emperor Vampire series: Clove.
I like it. I like how you have Claudius writing to his lost sons about what has passed in his absence. And it makes prefect sense how the brothers could have become lost to the group. I mean think about it. If they (the brothers) are that hurt couldn't they just shut down? Close them selves off from the pain and heart ache. The loyal and the counsel had to put a GPS tracing devise on them to keep track of them. So wouldn't it make sense that they could vanish if they wanted to. Plus we still don't know what other gifts the brothers have yet to reveal.
As for Orel Wessel I know that they have been portrayed as the evil ones. But maybe to the brothers in their pain they saw them as a sanctuary. Or then again the brothers may not even be with them any longer.
Plus the way you described the misery of Armor and Marcus was perfect. And how Claudius/Alexander discovered that Sex was his heart only after he was gone goes to show that no matter what he had said before was only lip service to the truth.
As for 7 years and 45 minutes passing since the brothers disappeared was a stroke of genius. I believe anything less would have been too soon. They (the characters) needed that time to truly feel the lose and try to move on.
I think I should shut up now and begin the waiting for your next installment.
In mean time I’ll just reread Cake, Cinnamon and Caramel again.
Have fun on your vacation.
BCO
I was shocked to see that you had started Book 4 after saying that we would have to wait.
I have been reading and rereading your Vampire Series and I have to say I Love them all. I Love your characters and your story lines.
I just have one question. When are you gonna get these stories published. I would like to be able to purchase copies so I can read them all the time without having to go online.
As for your opening prologue for Book 4 for of the Lord Emperor Vampire series: Clove.
I like it. I like how you have Claudius writing to his lost sons about what has passed in his absence. And it makes prefect sense how the brothers could have become lost to the group. I mean think about it. If they (the brothers) are that hurt couldn't they just shut down? Close them selves off from the pain and heart ache. The loyal and the counsel had to put a GPS tracing devise on them to keep track of them. So wouldn't it make sense that they could vanish if they wanted to. Plus we still don't know what other gifts the brothers have yet to reveal.
As for Orel Wessel I know that they have been portrayed as the evil ones. But maybe to the brothers in their pain they saw them as a sanctuary. Or then again the brothers may not even be with them any longer.
Plus the way you described the misery of Armor and Marcus was perfect. And how Claudius/Alexander discovered that Sex was his heart only after he was gone goes to show that no matter what he had said before was only lip service to the truth.
As for 7 years and 45 minutes passing since the brothers disappeared was a stroke of genius. I believe anything less would have been too soon. They (the characters) needed that time to truly feel the lose and try to move on.
I think I should shut up now and begin the waiting for your next installment.
In mean time I’ll just reread Cake, Cinnamon and Caramel again.
Have fun on your vacation.
BCO
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil ... that's worst than before ... Where is my tissue-box?
Even though, love it!
Even though, love it!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel a little bad for Claudius. He's lost nearly all his sons and I'm sure that if Marcus could, he would drift off with Armor too. I sense that the white haired demon will make an appearance soon.
And I might have missed it, but what happened to Sarah and Mrs. Winfield? Did you say/hint what happened to them or will that be answered later in Clove?
And I might have missed it, but what happened to Sarah and Mrs. Winfield? Did you say/hint what happened to them or will that be answered later in Clove?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck is going on? first they're all lovey dovey and the next moment they're betraying X and them. I hope that you will fill in the blanks.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well. I discovered this after my review in Caramel. I was half-excited, half-worried seeing that you had a Prologue for Clove. And.. after reading it, I'm still undecided. In a way, I'm sort of happy to know that Claudius is still Claudius. But I'm also absolutely distressed about everything else: the change in Marcus, the loss of Armor, the fatherless children.
I think my favourite line from the prologue has to be this one: I cannot explain it, but I know that somewhere, somewhere out there beyond the hand of the Vampire, beyond the nose and pack call of the Lycan, beyond the touch of the Hellcats, my Love is alive.
From that line alone, my fears are settled. From that line.. I can tell that they're worried. They want the Brothers back. That was my biggest fear, and you settled it by that single line.
It hurts me to think that the Brothers, who have suffered through so much and deserve a happily ever after more than anyone.. would be out there, alone, distressed, and who knows what else (other than you, that is).
If this is going to be the actual prologue of Cloves, then I can only cross my fingers and wait until the next chapter.
PS: I think you made a typo and wrote Riassa instead of Raissa?
I think my favourite line from the prologue has to be this one: I cannot explain it, but I know that somewhere, somewhere out there beyond the hand of the Vampire, beyond the nose and pack call of the Lycan, beyond the touch of the Hellcats, my Love is alive.
From that line alone, my fears are settled. From that line.. I can tell that they're worried. They want the Brothers back. That was my biggest fear, and you settled it by that single line.
It hurts me to think that the Brothers, who have suffered through so much and deserve a happily ever after more than anyone.. would be out there, alone, distressed, and who knows what else (other than you, that is).
If this is going to be the actual prologue of Cloves, then I can only cross my fingers and wait until the next chapter.
PS: I think you made a typo and wrote Riassa instead of Raissa?