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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 I think - Honestly, I liked the old version better. Even though I didn't read the sex scene. Damn. Missed that. But this version is okay too I guess. I don't really care. Just as long as I read about X & Co I'm fine.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! And I voted.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet - I liked the interaction. I loved the sentence about the flame, 'Ed' wants. Maybe one thing coming out of his OW-time it the overcoming of the shame, when he is nudely exposed to onlookers.
Thank you sharing! Go on!
Thank you sharing! Go on!
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, i changed my mind. it's better than before. looking forward to the next update.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Family
Oh boy....anticipation! He took another lover he is going to have one for everyday of the wekk at this rate. If X and Ed dont feel right it must be Sex or Az. Oh boy...cant wait. Update soon! I voted for ya!
Oh boy....anticipation! He took another lover he is going to have one for everyday of the wekk at this rate. If X and Ed dont feel right it must be Sex or Az. Oh boy...cant wait. Update soon! I voted for ya!
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have to say the first draft was ok,this was just amazing. really when you take the time to write, it is just wonderful and inspiring.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well what can i say
its great reading as usual u never disapoint though
i think the second chapter is way better i think i preferred the last prologue
but as said u r always a great read thank u :)
its great reading as usual u never disapoint though
i think the second chapter is way better i think i preferred the last prologue
but as said u r always a great read thank u :)
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like this version better and I deem it more fitting than the first. Still, I'm surprised Armor is out - I's expected Armor to curl in on himself and stay there - if only out of shame. I'd expected Marcus to be the one, finding the brothers... Still MUCH BETTER than the first version. Thank you for sharing!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why Kiix??????
Oh the agony...he is still in Orel Wessel clutches.....tear!!!!! Oh well I guess I just have to wait and see what happens now. MANNNNNNNN! Oh! The agony.
Oh the agony...he is still in Orel Wessel clutches.....tear!!!!! Oh well I guess I just have to wait and see what happens now. MANNNNNNNN! Oh! The agony.