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ohmygosh it almost made me cry!! Poor X!! T_T
being raped isnt all that fun....
cant wait till 'Clove' is done...its so great so far!!

Hey taste of insanity

I think that the two girls were his nieces...Shayne's daughters who names exscape me at the momment. He wouldnt have been able to see his daughters yet. Just my tidbit.

Ahh! Need more! I really like Kevin. He's a sweetheart! That was kinda a cliffy, you know! Can't wait for an update. I love this story and I'm constantly pushing the refresh button!

Chapter 5

Love the relationship btw Skell and Kevin.
I absolutely, still, loathe Orel Wessel! Ugh!

Great chapter!
Thanks,
R

I swear it, I could hear him play ... The part remembered me of that glorious Nyman-song "The heart asks pleasure first".

This chapter made me cry again but fortunately I have enough tissues left due to your refraining from killing Claudius.

I hope Vladimir gets his fang on Andrews dick. He deserves to die from castration.

The OW's must realize - even without the blood-samples - that their control is slipping. You can only twist a mind thus far before it completely breaks or turns into the kind of agression, a cornered beast shows.

I still wonder what OW is trying to gain. Up to now they sound like another assassination-agency but that can hardly be. Will you reveal anytime soon, what their intention is?

I so love your writing and - of course - voted for you on freewebs. Go on!

I finally caught up and I can say is ...WoW . So far so great, imho book 4 is even better than book 3- and well, book 3 was brilliant. I cried when Sex played - he really does have an big heart. I kind of admire him for that :) Uwa.. can't wait for more...

When will X finally be able to find home? (^_^)

Wow, I never thought you would rewrite all of that. I'm happy that you did, because that means more Blood Emperor goodness for me to read.

Ch. 2 Dear Diary

I must admit, I do like this better than Claudius' journal entry. It just screamed Xavier, and I loved the attitude he had in it. Also, it shows the anguish and pain he was feeling. Plus, it flows well with the other Books. I wasn't a hater of the old prologue, but this is amazing all the same.

Ch. 3 Skell & Coven

Ah, you re-wrote this. I'm sad that the Brothers don't return home soon, but I think it also makes more sense, since Orel Wessel is so strong.. they ought to be able to hold their prisoners captive pretty well. Reading this chapter with its additions, I found myself extremely satisfied. Plus, I picked up some stuff that I didn't notice before..

Quote: [I thought I felt something. I glanced around the room but it was crowded and I really didn’t pick it up again. It wasn’t a vampire and whatever it was, was gone.]

That must've been one of the Lycans - wasn't it? That's how they were able to find X! The Imperial Pack must've been on the lookout at various clubs, therefore.. when X walked in...

Oh, and yes.. I have concluded that it MUST be X in the beginning. I don't know why.. but I just feel that it is.

Ch. 4 Family

I read this before the other modified chapters.. so I was a little confused at first. (I got it afterwards) I'm happy to see that Kevin has figured out who the "White Demon of Death" is. This could lead to a whole lot of things.. the re-discovery of the Brothers.. and their escape.

Ah! And I've concluded that it's Sex in this chapter, isn't it?

Throughout these chapters, I picked up on a few things.. Some are comments, some are questions, and some are mix-ups.

First one is about the rapes.

[The sex, I made him enjoy even though he claimed to be “into girls”.] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven
[“Yes, I did. I made you enjoy it, but it was without your consent.”] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven
["You raped me again. You took me without my consent and you made no attempt to make me enjoy it. You are a selfish lover, Skell."] Ch. 4 Family

Hmm, so does X usually make him enjoy it or not? At first, I thought he did, but then.. it seems like he doesn't? I'm not sure...

And this is probably a little mix-up with facts..

[He barely knew how to bite.] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven
[The kid knew how to fang.] Ch. 4 Family

Both are about Kevin, obviously.

Speaking of Kevin, is his nickname Coven supposed to be derived from a Coven Fledgling, or as a play of his name (Kevin)?

I've been wondering who Andrews and Rogers are, exactly.
In Ch. 3 Skell and Coven, Rogers was the cruel one.. who controlled the submission collars.
But in Ch. 4 Family, it looks like Andrews is the exact same person.

[“You take one drop of human blood and I’ll keep the trigger down until you loose some brain cells. I can always claim it got stuck.”
“You’re an asshole, Rogers.”] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven
[“Still the ass, Andrews.” My collar tingled.] Ch. 4 Family

Um.. and this is about the name Skell.

[“Skell?”
“Skeleton. When they found me, I was wasting away. I looked like a prisoner of war. The doctors said that was why my Maker threw me away. My wings caused something else to happen. That’s why I have to eat human food and get those daily injections.”] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven
["Do you know who we are?”
“Orel Wessel.”] Epilogue Part Two (Caramel)

I thought Orel Wessel found him at the statue of Reggie? If so.. he wouldn't have been wasting away yet..

By the way, I voted! It seems you're in second place right now.

Ah, another thing!

[I get flashes, snap shots of people and places gone by. What killed me most were the faces of two little girls.] Ch. 3 Skell & Coven

Assuming those two little girls are Callia and Raissa, wouldn't he not know what they look like, since they weren't born when he was captured by Orel Wessel?

Chapter 2-4

Different approach but I like it all!!!

How was NYC? Miss the exploding steampipe?
Catch any plays? Drinks in any bars where
you sing show tunes all night?

Tell all!!
Thanks,
R