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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Firstly, I really love this series. The end of book 3 and the beginning of book 4 were a true emotional rollercoaster for me. I think it's good that there's the seven year gap between them - reading through that long a period of agony and void in Xavier's life might leave some readers in need of a therapist :P
"Cushion" as the third chapter was amazing, so I was somewhat annoyed when you re-wrote it. (It's your story though, so I'm not really complaining.) However, "Cushion" as the seventh chapter felt a bit forced and what is there now is so much better. So, best of luck in your future literary escapades and I can't wait to read more and more!
L
P.S. Is this going to be the kind of a "trilogy" like D. Adams' "Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy" books, where there are five books in stead of three?
Firstly, I really love this series. The end of book 3 and the beginning of book 4 were a true emotional rollercoaster for me. I think it's good that there's the seven year gap between them - reading through that long a period of agony and void in Xavier's life might leave some readers in need of a therapist :P
"Cushion" as the third chapter was amazing, so I was somewhat annoyed when you re-wrote it. (It's your story though, so I'm not really complaining.) However, "Cushion" as the seventh chapter felt a bit forced and what is there now is so much better. So, best of luck in your future literary escapades and I can't wait to read more and more!
L
P.S. Is this going to be the kind of a "trilogy" like D. Adams' "Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy" books, where there are five books in stead of three?
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freedom...
I like freedom better than Cushion...okay lets move on!
I like freedom better than Cushion...okay lets move on!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
That was the best chapter you've ever written in the whole series.
That was the best chapter you've ever written in the whole series.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. you just can't stick with your plot on this one 'eh kiix? *sigh* Ah well, at least you're sharing the artistic mullings of a writer with us.
Question: are you going to leave all of the rewrites in, or start over when the path of the characters fall into place?
All will be well, I love what you did with the children in this chapter-- I like this one the best plotwise, but I loved the smut bunnies as well. *smiles wickedly*
Asyen
Question: are you going to leave all of the rewrites in, or start over when the path of the characters fall into place?
All will be well, I love what you did with the children in this chapter-- I like this one the best plotwise, but I loved the smut bunnies as well. *smiles wickedly*
Asyen
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again change?T_T Interesting, poor X his head must be spinning...three kids (^_^)
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't forget to vote for Kiix's story here:(At the Some Kind of Wonderful) website
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Scroll down to BEST CHALLENGE RESPONSES: (at the bottom)
Then find: One Night At the Golden Pheasant by Kiix
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Click the VOTE:
Scroll down to BEST CHALLENGE RESPONSES: (at the bottom)
Then find: One Night At the Golden Pheasant by Kiix
Fill in the little hole next to it and hit VOTE at the bottom!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS ISSS SSOO GOOD!!
I love how you make the characters soo emotional.
PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE!
I love how you make the characters soo emotional.
PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A sweet chapter...the piano almost made me cry. Update soon!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: A day in the life...
Thank you for answering my questions, and for another great installment of Clove. (Sometimes, I feel as if I don't thank you enough)
You know, I have only 160 pages of the new Harry Potter book left to read, but I'm sitting here in front of my computer reading YOUR story. (That's how much I love your story)
Sex mastered the piano! (Well, it was Sex who was supposed to learn it anyways) I hope no more food burns had occurred before he had learned it.
This chapter gave me a sense of despair that I hadn't expected or predicted. Somehow, I found myself a little uneasy about Kevin. Is it jealousy? (I'm jealous for the five people bond/married/mated with him - at least, last time I checked, it was five. Tell me no more other than Kevin has sprouted) I should feel glad since the Brothers have SOMEONE there for them in this prison, but I don't know.. There's just something about it...
Oh, by the way, you never DID release the names of the Lycan pups in your last Epilogue. (Yeah, a bit late to mention that)
One question.. is the common room mentioned in the beginning of the chapter the same as the one in the end of the chapter? If so, when was their "privilege" or freedom taken away?
[We had been shifted to the common room mainly because my blue flame finally wore out, we reeked and the cell called ‘our room’ was a mess.]
[Apparently the word was out that I, ahem, we had gotten privilege back to the common room because it was completely empty.]
Thank you for answering my questions, and for another great installment of Clove. (Sometimes, I feel as if I don't thank you enough)
You know, I have only 160 pages of the new Harry Potter book left to read, but I'm sitting here in front of my computer reading YOUR story. (That's how much I love your story)
Sex mastered the piano! (Well, it was Sex who was supposed to learn it anyways) I hope no more food burns had occurred before he had learned it.
This chapter gave me a sense of despair that I hadn't expected or predicted. Somehow, I found myself a little uneasy about Kevin. Is it jealousy? (I'm jealous for the five people bond/married/mated with him - at least, last time I checked, it was five. Tell me no more other than Kevin has sprouted) I should feel glad since the Brothers have SOMEONE there for them in this prison, but I don't know.. There's just something about it...
Oh, by the way, you never DID release the names of the Lycan pups in your last Epilogue. (Yeah, a bit late to mention that)
One question.. is the common room mentioned in the beginning of the chapter the same as the one in the end of the chapter? If so, when was their "privilege" or freedom taken away?
[We had been shifted to the common room mainly because my blue flame finally wore out, we reeked and the cell called ‘our room’ was a mess.]
[Apparently the word was out that I, ahem, we had gotten privilege back to the common room because it was completely empty.]
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and on a sidenote.. it looks like "Rain or Shine by angels and effects" is getting a lot of votes. =\ I was hoping you would win. (We still have time though! The Loyals must not give up!)