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Chapter Papa

Oh it was sweet....Skell is the long H word and he is going to destroy OW...but can he stop at that. Once started can Long H word be stopped???? I miss the brothers and the love...oh well got to wait to see how the story unfolds.

Interesting, so Skell is a new brother after all:)

Chapter 8 "Straightjackets and Braids"

Right on!!! OW is gonna get theirs!!!!!
HA! HA! HA!!!!!!

Love Lanny, love the journey to the light
and his sighting of the brothers.

Hope SEX's heartache eases a bit.

This chapter IS better, it leaves things more...
open!

Thanks,
R

OHmygosh another brother!?
Lord Emperor Claudius....so Alexander is gone?
Oh me oh my so exciting!!
I can't wait to read about what Skell does...Revenge is bliss*macanical evil laughter*!!<.< >.>

wat!?! does that mean there's not gonna be a lot of the 3 brothers in the story? i wanna know how sex and claudias get back together

omg omg omg
that was fuckin A-mazing wow wow loooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeeddddddd it
skelll is so hot

Well I figured that you putting in the Skell could play the piano was so that later when he got brought back home he could do it in front of the others. I'm not sure who will be the one to catch him first, as it could really be anyone one, though I am hoping is more from the camp of either Claudius or Armor/Marcus, over say... the two other Ancients. Speaking of them, will they be showing up in the next couple of chapters? As for the explosions bit *grins*
Will Skell get a new name for himself btw?
*drops of LOTS of pocky for the muses and Kiix*

LOved this chapter :D - Skell was , wow ... when he stood and went to fight a war for the good of all (I know war is a terrible, but Skell was just too awesome :D)
Cool :D And now, he'll fight , seek revenge and destroy. Go Skell! Oh, and I can't wait to see Claudius/Skell meeting too. I't might have been a big missunderstandment, but if I were father I'd feel really guilty and crappy as hell.
BTW, loved how Armor cared for Skell. Also, the picture ---sweet :D
Oh, and can you please tell how did Skell learned to play the piano - was it mindwalking or the usual way ?

Haha, have you read the Anita Blake series? I read that series, and it really is like you say this is. Too much smutt, but then theres plot too. The difference I see when I read those books and then I read your stories. ...Your smutt doesn't really get annoying or seem like it happens to often and sometimes is just 'augh', to me at least, and it seems cut down a lot in these last two. Though thats probably just me. Your plots are very nice though. A professional editor will probably help. It sucks that you might have to go a vanity publisher, but maybe if you get a professional editor it will help you find a good publisher also, or at least one that will take your book.

Anyway, I'm thinking that was a little bit scrambled, I'm sorry. I liked this chapter. Once again XD I suck at being able to comment specific things.

Kiix,
Oooh fantastic chapter!!! As to your unable to incorporate the original chapter 3-- By all means save it!!! You never know when you may use it in the future. I loved this chapter immensly, Armor is being so patient with Skell (loved the detail of seeing the boys on the beach) I suppose he truly feels like he failed X. Can't wait for the next chapter to come!!!
Asyen