rate_review Reviews

Oh I love this story so much! I can't wait until the brothers come back. Skell is such an interesting character. He seems almost like a combination of the other brothers in some ways, but he is entirely different in others. By the way, the "winglets" are adorable.

So that's how Hades comes back *blink* ^_^;;

Oh Shit

HAdes versus Skell/Az/X/Sex again. Damn! Lets get it on!

*blink* HADES is ranked second to Armor/Marcus? Wow. I find that a little strange. Actually, when was Hades ever ranked in the House? I forgot to ask, is Claudius the CEO of Shadoe, and all the stuff X was in charge of? Hm... Then I hope the Brothers get their rightful place back. I like having them as Head. (For some reason, I can't stand the idea of Claudius being Lord Emperor and all that stuff. It makes me sick to the stomach...)

I didn't think Skell would be so emotional. I thought he was used to locking his emotions away, so this chapter took me by surprise. However, I'm glad to see that Claudius accepts Skell. And Skell has accepted the Brothers. Oh, I hope he'll get to see the Brothers during the challenge! (And you know what will happen THEN)

I'm excited for the next chapter, as always!

Ok, I’m back to driving you crazy with questions so put that pillow over the keyboard before you start banging your head into it.

First , I;M glad to see the story continuing , the frequent revisions were both good and bad. Sorry to see you kill off Kevin. It was better knowing a little of what OW did to the brothers while they had him. Making Skell Hasmeaillion works better then having Azrael become him.
My biggest question is who gave OW info about the broken covenant; very few knew this for good reason. So another spy and or traitor has to be giving this info to them
My guess if so would be the ancient council member he threatened in the last story. Did they want to get rid of Xavier so the lord emperor wouldn’t disband them?
Don’t get Claudius making him wait to see him or yelling at him about the piano. Missing Sex is not a good enough reason to do this especially in the beginning of his healing process.. He is supposed to love his son. Even if he betrayed him by taking the mantel of lord emperor Claudius, Armor, and Marcus should be going out of their way to bring his memories back. I See, Claudius only making the situation worse by his behavior. Why would the brothers want to come back to this reality is this is how those who are supposed to love him the most act out like that. Why would Skell want to let them out? And he isn’t a house guest; this is his house everyone else lives in.
Meeting the children, all of them was well written. It is good you made them older for the story even if it meant Xavier had to be gone so long.
Can’t wait to see if Liam recognizes Skell for who he is. Since he was the past Hasmeaillion shouldn’t he also see this right away like the seer did?
Will new powers also now become apparent real soon.\?
How soon will you be giving us armor and Skell at it? Loved the sex chapter written before. It seemed a let down what happened when he was strapped to the table.
Oh well will leave other questions for next time… thank you for continuing this story. Your definitely the best writer on .

The best part about being busy for the weekend is knowing that you're sure to have at least one chapter up by the time I'm free. I owe you SO much!

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT can't wait for more thanks

The reunion and Skell's story about the brothers... omg I cried!!!!!!!!!!!!!! waaaaah!
But Skell can't separate himself completely from the other brothers. Sooner or later the four personalities are going to meet up and it'll be allocated time again I guess......?! (hopefully sooner!) Though Skell'll have to share his memory of meeting the kids with them, unless you feel like repeating a scene similar to that with each of Xavier, Sex, and Azrael :P :P
Looking forward to the next chapter! And to mysteries revealed hehe!

Spiritxx

Chapter 9 "Papa"

How sad... You made me cry! (5 tissues)

Very bittersweet, well done.

Thanks,
R

Hi Kiix,

poor Skell, no rest for the wicked/winged. I love that guy but he must learn to follow his own advice. Hashmallim or not, he has to lean on someone too. I loved the piano-part. Less people ever see the results of their doing, for Claudius to see Skell as the personified form of it must kill him inside. The piano ... sniff, so lovely.

The meeting with the children leaves me a bit ... well, disturbed ... so to say. I think the von Drachenfelds are too careless with the little ones. How in hell could such a meeting happen? Where is Claudia? Such a second meeting should never have happened. I hope she and Marcus are going to kick some asses!

Ded is correct, but a beloved grandfather is more likely to be addressed as 'deduschka'.

The ancients come back. Yeah!!!! But where is Vlad? I hope he didn't get himself killed, running Bruce to ground.

So bittersweet - so good. Thank you!