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He CHALLANGED Hades?? But but but... is that really smart? I mean, shouldnt Hades be kind of a lot stronger?

Anyway: "Greetings, little fledgling. I am Claudius." That made my heart soar right out of the window. It's gaining hight too. I swear, we'll probably see it on the news tomorrow: "The First Heart On The Moon" . Im just so happy they made up!^^

Other than that: One blueberry pound cake to go, please!

Loved what you did with the diary entry, by the way. It really fits now.

Chapter 10 "Fathers and Sons"

Oh man!! This paragraph had me laughing out loud! (No milk in mouth this time.)

"Lanny took the initiative and sucked the fillings out of my head. He set me back on my feet and I had to blink a couple of times. Oh yeah, blueberry pound cake with a side order of ….damn you’re sexy. He smiled then turned and did his sauntering sashay across the roof. Maybe that was his normal walk. How the hell did he keep from getting his ass fucked for seven years?"

Can't wait for the return of the "Brothers", I think they will just love Skell! I hope!

Thanks,
R

Gosh, when did Skell challenge Hades? At least some things have been cleared up... So Skell now needs to meet the brothers. Maybe Hades will beat him unconscious and he'll see them again? Or maybe the challenge could bring them out again (though why they'd come out then and not the other times Skell had to kill I don't know..)
Am eagerly awaiting the brothers' return, and their reactions towards Skell... Somehow I'm thinking Sex will be the most understanding of the three of them... Xavier just might be overwhelmed by a third brother :P
Great writing as always!!! Thumbs up,

Spiritxx

Ok I have been reading what everyone else thinks and all i have to say is. Why does no one think Skell will win? i think he has a fucking good chance.
One:He looks like the pod and i know hades wouldn't mind getting them back
Two:He is going to be pissed, It hard to fight well when angry.
Three: He most likely is going to taut Skell, Try to pull the brothers out.
Four:Skell has nothing to lose.

Also. Why is everyone saying he needs the brothers to fight. They are crap compared to him! He doesn't need there skill he needs there love! It's easy to fight but when you have something to fight for. You fight harder and stronger.What does he have against Hades? it's not Kevin it will have to be something hades says like "We want the brothers or your not needed, What are you" He would turn into the cold killing machine and scare the crap out of everyone. Which want help he because no one know him long Lanny as "seen" anything. What would you do if he wins? Skell is a very double edge sword that they need to be careful with.
I think I need to stop ratting.
I really want to see what is going to happen. I check all thought the day hoping it's up.

First thank you for saying all those nice words it made me feel really good and not so stupid about my review. As it wasn't like the normal one's.

Know O.k i am getting scared, I am starting to feel like I know your Skell too well. First in your "are you kidding me" I made a comment about a "bloodhound meeting him". I at the time meant Lanny as i could see them working on "many" levels. This was before you posted them meeting.
Also his big speech to sounded like what I had said. I am not say it was. I just think I am getting your Skell muse.Please take him back, it's scary!Know that i have ranted and raved this is my review.

Ok can you kick Skell for me. When someone like Lanny throws himself at you. You don't go, "can you hold that thought i need the shit kicked out me first." unless they get to play nurse.
You go "give me a sec while I strip both of us and have sex for the next ten hours."As Skell said "Oh yeah, blueberry pound cake with a side order of ….damn you’re sexy". he wants him but if they bring the brothers back first.
I can see his needs coming at a very low last. When they are back everyone is going to want to see THEM. Yes SOME of the family had accepted him as a brother. Are they really going to want to see him though when there love ones turn up?
It is going to be a kick in the teeth to Skell. He is just starting to see this as more than hell just to be throw away again because once again they want the pod not him.
Yes it is a little selfish on his part. Skell has never been selfish he gave everything he could to everyone else. So why does he get put aside. Like he said "It’s like I’m not good enough. I got us HERE. That should be good enough. For everyone.". It just seems that they forget the little things.
Like he is apart of them he is living and breathing too. They might have been going though hell looking for the pod for 7 years but he has had 5yrs alone. Being told he was a freak and alone. So he will need everyone because he will need somthing to fight for not just Kevin.

I think Claudius should get brownie points with Sex for what he did with Skell.

Also why do I see there being a big cat fight with lots of yelling and people holding Claudius/Marcus/Armour/Haley back. when Hades and Skell start throwing mud at each other?

That is all I have to say. I hope it makes senses. Also I wished to be named president of the Skell fan club!I think i have earned it!
-HallowsEve

Okay, first of all, I was so sad when I first saw this because I had to go to work and I didn't have time to read it.

I'm glad that I'm not the only one who thinks that Skell needs to let himself be loved by the Pod and release the brothers to maybe help him with the battle and heal himself. I hope that he figures out a way eventually to release them. OR even a somewhat friendly chat.

Lanny might not have seen Claudius' reaction to Skell reading the diary, but I think that he knew that it would be very likely to happen ^^ I sure wasn't surprised.

Ah, I'm not surprised that Skell would challenge Hades, again. Well he wasn't around the first time the brothers challenged. He seems to be following in their footsteps a bit, even if he doesn't know it. Like learning the piano (something for Sex). It will be interesting to see how this one goes. I think the Skell will win ONLY and only because he is Blue and Lord Emperor (sort of, kind of, you know what I mean), and Hades claimed to be loyal to the brothers because he was Lord Emperor. Hades might beat the HELL out of Skell, to near death even, but I don't think he has enough motivation to kill Skell. I'm not saying that Skell couldn't do equal damage to Hades, but Skell can't use his blue abilities. If Skell remember those and could have improved on those in the 5/7 years he was away, plus gain new skills and improve on his other fighting skills, then yes, perhaps Skell could win. But in the end Hades is a very OLD ancient.

Marcus' reaction to Skell could be interesting and even more interesting could be to Skell's piano skills. Especially since Marcus has given up his own music/art talent. It would really be something I would like to see. Pwease?? *offers Pocky to the muses as bribery*

I've been gone for the summer and haven't been able to read a word of your story since June... and I'm so glad that I could get to it now. It's good, really good. I have to say, I was sad when Claudius/Alexander... whatever he's going to be known as... pushed Sex away like that. But it seems like it's going to be fixed somehow. Also, it's odd that Xavier won't be Lord Emperor. I guess having freedom to do what he wants is what he's been craving for so long, but it's gonna be weird to see him without that title. Blah, I'm babbling. Keep up the awesome work!

I wrote a review evil internet eater of reviews ate it. >_<

It was basically a long ranting agaist Clauius.Even if HE is my fav at the momment. He really really fucked up the brothers so with all my love I critisized him. XD better for you if it disappeared.

About Skell. I like him. He's sensitive and messed up too. But he's, somehow, more in control and less at the mercy of 1000 contrdictory feelings... for now. I think the brothers needs someone in charge for a some time while they take some hollidays at the beach.

i love how u re worked this chapter clever u
i luv skell
thank u 4 the new chapter
:)