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person Miharaz
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol awesome! I wanna see Skell kick Hades ass =P and then Liam will be like all "Hashmallin you have arrived" and stuff =P Looking forward to the next chapter =)
person k
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honeybee!!! That's becoming a running joke to his life - the X-brothers warping him from his position in the house but I love the current flow of the story. I liked that X tried to convince Sex to go to father and that Sex isn't prepaired for it jet ... I was ranting about this in former reviews, so you know my point. Well, I guess he has to come out to 'beat father, whom I assume to be first, into a pulp ... ah that isn't going to work unless Claudius does a 'Hades' and submits to him rather than beat him up but there is always the opportunity of your marvellous imagination to simply take another road and leave me with my chin dropped to the floor.

Love that chapter, love all of the brothers, love poor injured honeybee and LOVE YOU for sharing this jewel.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really intense. I don't know if I like this challenge more or the previous one. Regardless, I must say I'm really proud of their Blue Blood Genes right now. This is why I love following this series. I'm looking forward to the challenge against Armor. Will he submit to X without a fight..? Hm, I guess we'll only find out in the next chapter.

I'm so glad that the Brothers took Skell in without question. He really needs acceptance from them. Hm, metal wings. What does that symbolize, I wonder?

Speaking of symbolism, I think it's time I try to decipher the symbolism between the Brothers.

X - Red wings, long red hair: His sorta red reminds me more of autumn leaves.. gentle, falling, wispy.
S - Phoenix wings, long white hair: He seems a bit like a mix of an angel and a devil. Interesting combination.
A - No wings, short red hair: He seems more I'm-just-me and in-your-face than the other brothers. No fancy business.
S.. oh shit, Skell and Sex have the same initial. Um Sk - Metal wings, hair unsure?: Hm, I'd say the metal wings are his way of protecting himself.

Question: Who has Endellion now? If Skell's Hashmallin, then shouldn't he have it?

Oh, and, I find Sex and Skell similar. I don't know why.. but I do.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I forgot to mention how happy I am to see the Ancients return. They're sweet.. though I miss Hades' bratty behaviour and Liam's sarcasm.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. it's me again. So um, how's your vacation?
person Cindyip
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, Hades seem to have lost his edge(^_^)
person Laur
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay the Brothers are back...but its all confusing...

Question 1:
Skell challenged for 2nd to try to communicate with the brothers and so that the house would be behind him? Or did he try to do that to get to Claudius...its all confusing!!!

GRRRRR!
Skell is the baby brother and he can now change back and forth with the other brothers right? btw that was Q2

So do X/Az/Sex/Skell want to be Blood Emperor or 1st in the Assassins???

Kiix...your killing me!!! NEED MORE INPUT!!!! NEXT CHAPPIE!!!
person k
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, love it, love it and I can hardly wait for honeybee to enter the stage. Second - the little menace had his hands full in the last seven years but otherwise I guess most lower ranking assassins would sooner piss themselves, than go for a round with the ancient. I can't wait for that fight ... maybe Marcus should be pissed. They could have try him Skell lead to the brothers. I love that development, please hurry with the next chapter!

Vladimir with Claudia?????!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lord Hashmalliam ,sure, is a great brother - made me cry twice now. Oh, Lanny if brothers weren't flaming gay I sure would be your rival number one. Now ,though I can only admire how you try to get closer to the youngest brother :D
Oh, I cannot wait for next chapter - the fight and reunion ... :)
Don't know what to say, everything is boiling inside like a volcano. Sure thing I'll be checking for update every hour or so :)
P.S. After rereading the diary I allmost forgave Claudius for being an ass. Skell is so insecure and lonely, Father sure was evil for not welcoming him in and making him feel like home. Oh, and piano scene was lovely...
person aurora0821
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Ok, now you’re on a roll. Loved the last chapter, and can’t wait to see what’s going to happen with Skell fighting Hades. Hopefully it will bring the brothers back fighting to protect them selves from the beating he is going to be giving them... the pod boys need to retake the title of number one in the house … and beating Hades and then Armor/Marcus is the way to start getting control of his life back.
Maybe with Skell’s help, they can do so with out Hades giving up to them again like he needed to do in their first fight. If not they are in for one hell of a whipping, lol.
But if Hades does beat Skell unconscious and he finds him self waking up in the burn room, with Armor lying besides him …. Oh joy my favorite couple would be back together if Skell should wake up as Xavier. But when the boys do come back will they immediately forgive Claudius and Armor their betrayal? Will be interested to see how you fix this problem between them. Having the boys be a little distant for a short time can be realistic also. Given what happened to them.
Skell and Lanny will make a nice couple this not only fixes Azrael having another partner but also gives him his own lover and anchor in the world.
You still didn’t answer how OW knew about the broken convenent , and its interesting to know that they didn’t know about Claudius and Sex. Does that also meant they didn’t know about Marcus /Armor. Did they know about there fracture. Who is giving them info????
Keep up the good work. Enjoying the story .

aurora