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schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh the was sweet. I love kitties
person Lina
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I have really enjoyed your writing and I can say that it has been quite wonderful. I was just wondering, what happened to Vladimir? I always felt kinda bad for the poor Lycan, he can't help how he feels and his ways were just not those that the Lord Emperor was used to so it was hard for him to be accepted. Also, in chapter 11, this part: "Azrael knelt at my side and held my hand as my shoulder erupted into a pain I don’t remember ever feeling. I tried not too but it was too much. I screamed and…." Is the "I tried not too" a typo and was there more to the sentence or was it supposed to be "to" and not "too" with a comma and not a period at the end of that sentence? Just wondering, anyways great work and thank you for your fast updating it's a life saver, I love this story!
person k
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad - so good. The shower, that was simply heartbreaking. Poor X, he feels bad about being subdued in three month. He still is self-doubting himself so much, that it hurts. Maybe the other two can tell him, it wasn't a matter of strenght. Azrael is a survivor and stubborn; Sex wins every race on that two points and X, though he does a gob job when needed, was never meant to be a fighter and otherwise than the other two, he had no experience how to work around the drugs. He surely gave them strenght while subdued. Poor Xavi.

Liam truly is ambivalent. He of all people has absolutely no right to assault Xavier for zapping his Honeybee but o.k., he is heavy in love. He is forgiven. It was lovely of Hades, to donate a glass of his blood. I think he deserves time with the brothers, to talk things out and receive a tight hug. I think, he could be of help with Skell's psyche and feeling. He endured so much and did the same cruelties. He could even stand an attack from babybrother (during a flashback or other occurances) and cradle him to his chest afterwards. Skell could feel better about himself around the little pest. It's not nice but humans work that way - they feel less unworthy and more confident around people, who aren't angels themselves.

Whatsoever - so many meetings to come, so much to overcome, so little time to heal. Keep up the good word!
person k
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah me again. It just came to my mind. Would Vlad enjoy Skells domineering manner?
person Cindyip
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Az and Sex come out soon to play? Its time for a meeting of the minds^_^
person Duelriel
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, bunnies! And I was curious how the kitties were without their Xavier to feed them... Can't wait to see how the fight with Claudius goes! <3
person Laur
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Homecomming

Oh I cried....it was so sweet. Thanks for clearing everything up Kiix. Oh Armor and X are always so sweet. I wonder what will happen with Sex and Claudius.
person Spirit
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! I can't wait to read about the other reunions! Though SAXS's body is going to be worn out from all that sex lol
I'm loving this story with every new chapter, most definitely.

~Spiritxx
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just now, I was in a terrible TERRIBLE mood. (So terrible that I was very much close to tears) Knowing that you should probably have a chapter up by now, I came to take a peek.. and now, my eyes are teary for a whole different reason. God bless you for all the wonderful things you provide me (and the Loyal) with. X/Armor is definitely my favourite pairing - no matter what. They just scream 'lovable'.

Haha, thanks for attempting to answer my question. I'm going to go check out your Rants section now.
person Rosei
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 "Fair vs the Real"

Wow!
I really, really, really, REALLY-- missed Xavier!
Missed his crying and his emotions.
Can't wait 'till Armor gets a hold of him!

Great fight scene! Cool! (Was using his metal tipped
braids as weapons cheating?!)HA!

Actually felt sorry for the Honeybee!!

Thanks,
R