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person ayachan
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, they're getting married! That's sweet :) Haha, polar, that's cute. And I'm glad Morose is back! It killed me when he died
person ayachan
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! Great ending! I'm sad that this book is ending, but excited that there'll be a book 5! Will it continue with the "C" trend? Anyway, good luck!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, I got chills that was major cool.
person Spirit
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. oh my gosh... finally we get the revelations in this chapter!! I can feel it ending... and I'm sad :( because this is SUCH a good series!
I think you should have one more chapter [it could be in the epilogue too, Idk] and it should be set when Xavier turns 100 and a ceremony or something as the title is officially passed on to him... or maybe not! Maybe Claudia decides that she LOVES being Empress and keeps being her :P I can actually see her doing that hehehe

~Spiritxx
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah! Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter... i'm very busy lately with skool so yea ;__; anyways... congrats on your contract (right?) for Cake! Can't wait for that to come out~ And love your chapters (as always). Wow... blueberry... =slurps on blueberry muffin= >D heh. And oh my... i wonder what will happen next. It's kinda funny in a way that that 'wild eyed woman' is holding Claudia captive because isn't Armor holding that traitor (kinda) captive too? Gun on head? Hmm... or no? Anyways... can't wait and now i must go to sleep... i'm completely exhausted. Hope you're faring better than me. ^^; laterz~
person laur
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CLAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPS

yay! such a good ending!

YAYYYYYYYY!
person lone_child
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomgomg!!! waaaaa!!! that was awesome!!!!

is that the last chapter?
when's the next one going to be out??
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O that's it? No no no nonono...you're not going to end it there are you? Im sure you can pull another book out ne? Please? *Puppydog Face* I'll give you home-made cookies :)
person steph291
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch. 47 - nice ending! I didn't see that one coming!
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 4 complete books! Congratulations! Claudia becoming empress surprised me, but hopefully it's a good choice. Looking forward to the epilogue.

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