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Chapter 14 "Crossroads"

(Sorry, but HP's 7th book has kept me occupado for
a while, but, HOLY COW!)

Marcus, Marcus, Marcus... what are you gonna do with
that knucklehead?! I know he's been incredible lonely which
was probably brought into stark relief once Claudia was able
to find a love match with Vladimir. Did he feel that someone
was left for her but not for him? Did he feel extra abandoned?

Tell all!! Pretty prease!!

Thanks,
R

2 chapters :D I am really glad now, I had to spend some time with no access to inernet :D
Raissa is such a sweetie, well all winglets are. Still, the brocolli scene was adorable:)
Vlad and Claudia, I have to admit I hoped it would happen :) They were really out of place - two not so wanted mates of lord emperor.
Oh, and speeking of Vladimir - X punched him accidently? With all what happend at OW , does that mean he can hurt someone unintentionly again?
BTW, I agree wit Liam , X beat the hell out of Hades, because he was hurting and angry. Still, it did little to even the ill Hades done to Sex. But, maybe brothers would be more willing to forgive their grandfather now ?
Oh, and Liam is turning to be someone gr..good if I may say so,

Ugh, didn't expect that from Marcus. Poor Azrael... Weren't one brother's heart broken enough? Not only that - it is not the first time Az gets betrayed. I can almost see how Marcus made himfelf forget Az (barely , but it can be well, not forgoten... forgiven). But how could he act so bastardishly and cold to Az in that room. Guilt and suffering aside, doesn't he remmember what Azrael told him last time then they made up?Doesn't he realize how much pain he is causing?

P.S. I miss Skell so much...
P.S.S. A dumb question , but where can I find forum?

Hello there kiix

I should have done this review business from the start but I got so into this story that I kept telling myself "I'll review next chapter..next chapter...next chapter..."So here I am now reviewing, 151 chapters later, while waiting for the next one:P
I could ramble about all I like bout your story but that would take up too much space so I'll just say I've never came across such a complex tapestry of personalities weaved so wonderfully with life, love and a whole lotta smut^_~ and for me the best complement I can make is tell you I stopped reading the last Harry Potter book so I could keep reading this:)

About this chapter tears came to my eyes when Marcus said "Yes" Oh.Dear.God what else have you planned for these poor vampires.

I guess this is all, will review more often from now on... See You^^

I can't believe it. You're not serious. Why? How? But..... Marcus gave up? He gave up on Azrael and the brothers? He threw his supposed love out the window?
I'm in shock.... Another chapter please!!! To clarify all this!

~Spiritxx

PS. I'm glad Az is getting a breath of fresh air too hehe...

Nooo, how could he just throw Azrael away like that? After everything they've been through... though I keep getting the feeling that Marcus just doesn't love Azrael. Oh well, we'll see! Please update soooon T_T

I have been one of the Loyal since the beginning but have been too young to have an account to review until now. I wanted to point out that Claudius is his own grandpa cause you fergot that in your list of relations. Much Lycan Love, the Unknown Loyal Asylum.

Pillow talk almost made me cry...

Wont be online moving into my dorm...cant wait for the fight between marcus and Az.

Marcus, what happened to you?!T_T

AHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT!????!!!?!?!?!?! After everything that Marcus did and Azrael forgave.... Marcus threw him away as soon as he dissapeared? No wonder his art and music dissapeared. When he threw Azrael away... he threw away his soul too.... -.-

Yay! Xavier is back! And wow.... claudia and vladimir... not i was expecting but it does wrap things up nicely =D i like that were getting to see Azrael next chapter but i think the chapters with Sex appearing are going to be heartfelt and full of pain... I'm also looking forward to seeing what Skell has in him since he's technically "Hashmallin"...

and something Xavier said kinda bugged me... He said that he was supposed to be the first brother but he fell first and Azrael lasted 6 months but Sex lasted the longest against Orel Wessel... Wouldn't that be because Sex IS the first and original brother even if he chooses to deny it? I'm pretty sure thats what was decided in the preivous books...