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Yay! Was awesome but also kind of strange... with his initial reaction in the bedroom... i'm thinking he was trying to see what Azrael wanted and if Azrael still wanted him after all the years he'd been away... but thats just my theory =P

FABULOUS as always! THOUGH I do have one little complaint. Marcus was so cold when he told Azrael that he threw away his stuff in the last chapter, how come he didn't just tell him that he moved it or something? And I think that's the only complaint I've had with your work :P Keep up the awesomeness!

Chapter (15) 152: "Apples & Cinnamon"

Now I feel a real sense of normalcy!
I guess 2 out of 4 is good enough for me!

Thanks for the loving chapter.
These two really needed to be together for
me to feel that everything would be okay!

Thanks,
R

Done moving into my dorm!!!! WHOOOO!

Why the hell did Marcus give up AZ???? What the funk is going on......UPDATE!

let me just say i really love all 4 of these books. its really nice to be able to read a story that is as long as its been and not think its getting boring. i think you do the vampire genre real good and i hope you keep up all the good work. thanks.

Nothing can satisfy my needs as much as your updates. No amount of yaoi manga, or.. whatever. It just HAS to be YOUR work. Have I become a SAXS junkie?! Oh lord.

Ch. 14: Crossroads

My favourite part of this chapter was the scene in which X was looking at all the paintings. I could picture every one of them in my head.. and it gave me a warm, though sad feeling. It really hit me there how the Brothers were gone for seven effing years. SEVEN years. They've been absent for quite a portion of his loved ones' lives.

I wanted to kick Vlad's face in, though I guess I shouldn't have cared. Somehow, I did. I never did like that fellow anyways.

Azrael. I'm happy to see him back. And his greeting to Snowflake was just as expected. (Are all Hellcats so rude? I thought they ought to be nicer to their masters.) But.. the thing with Marcus... I know Marcus changed, but we still haven't seen the depth of it. I have mixed feelings about this.. I mean, he can stand up tall on his own now - that makes me happy.. but.. throwing all remnants of Azrael away..?

Um.. Vlad never did anything to Marcus, right? If he did, I would personally make sure he can NEVER bed his Alpha's wife ever again.

Oh Silly Marcus. Why must you treat Az so harshly? *eyes Kiix* Okay, what have you done to Marcus now?! It can't be just that the brothers have challenged him (assuming that he knows). I would assume that it has something to do with not having Az for so long but knowing you, there's something MORE to this. Why must you torture those two so?? *wonders if she should introduce you to her friend, a metal battle with barbed wire wrapped around it*

Anyways *smiles sweetly and all innocent like*

I hope that the brother's will get a chance to live a semi-private and semi-normal life after all is said and down and they get a chance to be a father. I'm sure that they could be a good emperor and do a lot of good. But they really do need a chance to live a normal life.

When will you re-introduce the brother's (human) family and explain what happened with them in the missing 7 years??

Ok wow I never thought I would get this far. I have been reading this story for the past week and a half. I started on Cake and moved my self through the books. You are one of the most complicated writers I have ever had to pleasure to read their work. I am in love with this story. I am sad I have to wait for more. I am so used to just clicking the next chapter button, but now I have to wait for another update. Kinda makes me sad, but I am so eager to read the chapters ahead. I have to say right now poor Azreal, he is always getting fucked over. I understand that Marcus is sad and trying to get over the grief of having his love one torn away from him, I can only imagin what is it is like for Azreal, and the brothers. I also feel alot of sympathy for cludius. Man he was trying to help sex, but it blew up in his face, and turned out to be a catistrophic turning point. I truely hope sex forgives him and they work it out, because I love them, I read the chapters and every chapter seems to bring out some emotion in me weather it be happiness, or laughter, sometimes even tears, at the super sad points. In the Third book I starting misting when I thought Sasha died, that was super sad. I give you many Kudos for this master peice, if you ever decide to publish this series, know I wil be in line to buy it. I might just go back and reread cake and the older stories to refreash my mind a little more.
Great work

Sasha

I'm really mad at Marcus, it seems I get mad at him a lot. He is always giving up, pushing away when things get stressful or hard. I know he is damaged but really it seem he lost hope to soon especially for how old he is. poor Az more heart brake for him. and the thing with sex and Claudius well I just hope he kick his but into the next month.

What are you doing now? Whatever it is, I think I like it. Seems Marcus and Armor have someting in common. That could drive a thorn between Sex and Azrael for a while. They lost their mates (for now) due to the same impact. I guess Marcus and Claudius have issues too.

Liam was nice - yes, I admit that ... don't like him still. X should have a talk with Hades. They shouldn't worry about something trivial like personal relationships, when going to war. I agree with Liam about most things he said, and even though I don't want Honeybee to be in danger, I think he should challenge Marcus. One - X or Marcus - has to stay behind for the winglets sake and I'm sure X can't. He was and is the father of the nation and ... well, see the last of my reviews.

I don't expect any longer Armor to be the one Azrael has to beat in the challenge. I guess he will punch himself back into Marcus' life and get rid of a part of his own frustration. Right before the challenge Marcus couldn't anyway answer his question in any other way. Azrael is still in his heart, maybe even stronger protected, I'm sure of it.

I wonder if I can get Liam to lock Marcus/Armor, Claudius and the brothers up in the music-room. I think, if they are forced to play now, it could start a healing process. Their music reflects untainted, what is in their hearts - the pain, the love, the worries etc. I think they should play for the others to hear, even if it was painfull in the beginning.

So much for now. Thanks for that chapter! Go on!