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person Rainy
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe ^^;; Okay, Kiix beating/death threat is temporarily removed. For now anyways.
I think that Az got the reunion with Marcus he wanted. And everyone else wanted too. *pervy grin*
The fight later on should provide to be interesting if Azrael and Armor are the ones who fight it. They both have issues with each other and I'm sure they both have frustrations to work out and neither one of them would mind working out that frustration on each other ^^;;
It will be interesting to see how Sex's first time out will be and how his interaction with Claudius will be.
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMmmmm...I really like Marcus right now.
Brilliant homecoming for X and Azrael, by the way. Cant wait for Sex to poke his head in...
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg amazing
person Cindyip
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs in relief* You gave quite a scare, I really thought sweet Marcus was gone(^_^)
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHP. 152 - Hot and sweet and oh so good.
I love that Marcus kept buying things for Azrael even if he was gone for so long. that's so sweet. *fangirl squeal* Although sometimes I get the feeling that you solve things too quickly, I think that you should milk it a little longer,you know, have these two quarelling for longer. But then they're so stubborn that it would probably last till the end of the book; and there's still the trouble between Sex and Claudius, so plenty of angst to come. sorry for all the rambling
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH, how easy you can make me change my mind. Here I was writing Marcus' name in bold letters in my black list ( under the section painful and humiliatin death, right after the name - Andrews (this name is written in blood)) and now it seems he was not a bastard after all. I still don't get one thing though when Az asked "Marcus, you threw me away?" and he replied that "Yes." Didn't Marcus understoot that was the worst thing he could have said? Also, can't Marcus just say: " Ok, I give up" so that Az and Armor don't have to fight. Because, games are games but Az MUST win this one. Dirty tricks or no tricks. And both Armor/Marcus seem to understand that.\
Oh,Skell how I miss thee..Sex you too ( but not as much as Skell...:P)
person k
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kiix,

apparently I have a dull day. I'm not sure I got what you are driving at with Marcus and Hades. Well, here are my 'ramblings' anyway.

I feel for Tristan. It seems Marcus took out all his frustration at him; it seems also like younger brother doesn't need to show him how to rip a soul-ribbon. Marcus version IS 'a message'.

quote 'Marcus sent a message. He mindfucked him…then dismembered the living corpse before the assembled rank.' unquote

What a message! I fear Marcus music is tainted with big stains. Back to Hades. Was he there or not? When Marcus challenged for third, he wasn't back in the house and I assumed from that sentence he didn't witness Marcus challenging for first but maybe I overlooked a line and he was there but even if so, why would that stop him. We already covered him being stronger etc. The only reason, I can think of is Hades, having a soft moment. Seeing Marcus mentally and physically destroying Tristan somehow in remembrance (I know wrong term but to Marcus it must have pretty much like Azrael was dead.) of Azrael might have touched a part of Hades, where he didn't want to cause further damage to Marcus' core for the sake of the brothers and Claudius. I'm willing to believe that, not only because Hades is basically sweetness and light himself but also because Liam's deed did the same to him. Seeing the effects of the brother's vanishing surely reminded him of his centuries in the twisted cage, Liam forced him into. If I got you right, than yes, it is satisfying me :-)

I knew it, Marcus didn't throw Azrael out of his heart. Is the challenge really necessary? Liam said, Hades would have given X his rank, if he only asked and I assume, that goes for Marcus too. There is no rule, stating they would have to challenge back to their former ranks. However, there is still some anger inside of the brothers and it is partially directed at the eldest brother-combination, so a beating is possibly not so bad an idea. I even think it gives eldest brothers an opportunity to vent some anger - the only problem is. X and Azrael haven't really done something to deserve the anger and accusing them for not being able to stop Sex back at the wedding would be a harsh blow to X's already wounded ego + you would have bigger chances to stop an express train than to stop Sex.

The storage room and the violin-case, all the things Marcus bought for Azrael, creating memories to share with his love. That was so sweet and nice. I love that T-shirt. Poor violin, I hope someone took care of it but it's more likely its soul has died. Marcus should anyway play another violin. The musician, who shared a big part of his soul with it isn't any longer. The new Marcus would taint this particular instrument. Surely the violin will rebel against him and not sound 'right'. Would be nice of Azrael to buy him a new violin.

The last chapter left me with another question. Your vampire and lycan can interbreed? What's the result? If they can't, I don't see the use of neutering Vlad. It's not that his relationship with Claudia would be openly affirmed or even allowed because Vlad is a 'castrate'.


Since Hades doesn't take invitations to chess and afternoon tee, I will have to wait for the next chapter. Greetings!
k
person AsyenMari
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiix,
This chapter was...dare I say it...ADORABLE!!! I have always loved the Marcus Azrael dynamic; they are so much deeper than the other characters in my opinion - the true yin yang. Fantastic chapter as always, sawee I haven't reviewed in a while, I was on vacation in TX.
Asyen
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sexy threesome with a violin. If that ain't one of the kinky-est thing I've ever heard of then I've been sodimized by a tractor. What ever happened to the third Hellcat, and will there be a fourth? I'm glad to see Snow reborn. When is the rest of the lycan pack going to be introduced, seeing as the females arrived while they were absent? Is Az goingever going to bget some of the royal gifts?

Much Lycan Love,
Asylum
person Laur
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Apples and Cinnamon

Oh that is so sweet??? Man was that Armor or Marcus before...did Marcus fracture again???? OOOOOH the suspense!!!!!

Cant wait to see what happens...What happened to the rest of the lycan pack?