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Someone help me, I'm starting to like Marcus... Mortal Kombat amused me greatly - have fun guys!

Why do I get the impression you have something in petto with those obstinate Hendersons? They aren't OWs, aren't they? I'm surprised Marcus didn't 'fuck them into submission'.

Poor Claudius, he and Sex did a great job fucking each other over. You know my feelings about the upcoming fight, so I spare you the tirade. I'm not entirely sure about Claudius ambitions. Regarding the boys as boys, that's for sure but I fear he doesn't want to think this over because that would incline accepting another big portion of guilt on his shoulders? And than there is that 'tiny bit of ambition', inbred in all the royal-blue-liners. Even though they claim Sigmund to be his father, Claudius has many things in common with Liam. If they only let him, Hades could do so much for his step-son / brother and his step-grandchildren / nephews. The poor lad must feel like in a bad movie, seeing so much of his and Liam's mistakes repeated. Old habits die hard...

Yes, I'm cheer-leading again for Honeybee, I just love that guy. That brings me to another question. Hades is a red, so he naturally doesn't strand on the beach in his 'afterlife-afterlife' but he has shared blood with the original fountain over and over for centuries. Does that get him a bonus and a tiny chance to end up with Liam on the beach? Azrael never forfeited his threat to kill him once; wouldn't it be a hellish payback, if he killed Honeybee only to end stuck up with him on the beach? They already have to mark claims.

I'm still waiting for Sigmund to make an appearance. He must be somewhere. He has never been seen on the beach, neither did a brother stumble upon him in the dark. If Liam isn't hiding some information, the 'deadly fruit cake' is hovering around but where?

Thank you for the music-thing! Since the beating is moved to the new playground of the house, I guess the red piano is safe. It would be a hell of a surprise if Claudius choose it as his weapon. That is one thing he and the brothers have above Marcus. The dark was always a part of their souls, they were born with it and so was their music.

How is baby-brother doing on the beach?

Next chapter soon please! LY

Chapter 16 "Turn the Other Cheek"

Very nice chappie. Love the scene where Marcus ask Azrael
to ask him what he should have asked Hades.

Whew!!! Can't wait for the SEX/Claudius fight scenes.
Can't wait! Can't wait! Can't wait! CAN'T WAIT!

Really,
thanks!
R

Marcus, you are too much *smirk* (^_^)

I can't decide my favorite character, I say I like this trait about this character, then I'm like I like the another character because of some other funny thing they did or said, but if I had to pick. I would say that the Brothers, Cludius, Amour & Marcus, Haley, and Chesterton are my absolute favorite characters. Haha that is nine characters. This is such a complicated story, how you came up with this master piece is just WOW. I wonder when you found the time to think all this stuff up and create to characters so well. That even if you never said a name you would know between the characters, because of the intricate characteristics. I can't wait to get another dose of this wonderful and exciting story. I have a question though, does Skel get with lensang, and how are they going to make time to let skel out when all the brothers complain about not having enough time with their own loves.
Fantastic work

Sasha

Thanks!

Kiix,
MORTAL KOMBAT!!!! That was fantastic, I actually have that soundtrack-- that is a perfect themesong for a timed fight. I feel the next chapter will be rrreeeallyy good, so HURRY UP!!! I'm just joking with you. So Cipher submitted his rank to Azrael, that was to be expected; but I figured Az to at least wait a bit-- bond with the children, get back into the circle of his family-- before he challenged Claudius for head of house. So, yeah that was unexpected. However, I guessed correct when I thought it was really Sex who requested the challenge-- just using Az's lips. It is time for his wounds to begin to scab.

I do wish you will include some nice smuttyness between Lanseng and Skell-- I wanted some more between him and Vlad, but meh if you don't ask you don't recieve...

Great job on this chapter as usual.
Asyen

Wow, Intimidating Marcus is cool. I'm impressed.^^

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update once more before i have to send my laptop in to get fixed :*(
which will be probably tomorrow. *sniff*

I just love how you rapped that up I'm really so happy he waited and it was so cute how he bought stuff for him for seven years.

Ok seriously, i'm sad that i had to wait so long to read chapters 3-15 but that's my own damn fault. Seriously wickedly awesome dear!!! I cannot wait for more :D