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Riot is back!!! Yeah! I asked before and I have to say I'm dying out of curiosity: Who is Riot's girl? Is his daughter a friend of the winglets? Is she called Edna?

And Hades - I just love the way you make him think. Golden Phoenix - that's brilliant, just brilliant. More of my fave-Honeybee please!

I hope Marcus doesn't get in trouble with Lex. If the kids I use to look after are anyting to go by - recoloring of the dragon would result in a tantrum. Lex might see the 'yellow fiasco' as something sacrosanct because it was the first thing, his daddy made for him.

You make me think, you have something in store for Azrael. I bet he has Endellion. That would explain why Lanseng mistook him as Hashmallim. Speaking of Lanseng.

quote, '(...) Once Alarik perished, I was able to ‘see’ all of you again. (...)' unquote.

How very disturbing, why hasn't he found the brothers? He has crap timing but OW didn't travel with Skell. I'm confused.

Nice chapter, more please!

*giggles* Mmmm... I have a craving for blueberry pie.

A tie, just as it should be:)

:D I really look forward to next chapter. A fight between Armor/Azrael was much antictipated. A light teasing and bickering - they are brother's 100 percent.
BTW, I like the changes in Marcus - now we can trust him not to break Azrael's heart.
OW,and A question if I may: What kind of clothers Skell likes? I'd say 'sluty boys-r-us' (love this fraze :D) would suit him (wishful thinking), but maybe something more combato like? Really I can't imagine :) Still, I bevieve he wouldn't appreciate Xavier's style :D

Two beautiful chapters in a day. Mmm, can you say PERFECT?

Ch. 15 Apples & Cinnamon

I'm really, really glad to see that the change in Marcus isn't as terrible as I thought it would be. In fact, it's such a sweet, positive change, and exactly the one we need for Marcus to be strong in the war that's due to come.

Ch. 16 Turn the other cheek

I was a little doubtful when I noticed that there was barely a third of the page left, and the Challenge was yet to occur. And then, Marcus pulls off a stunt like that. Hm, I don't disagree though. It's just like what newly improved Marcus would do. Oh, but I do appreciate having the Azrael/Armor fight. That's definitely going to be interesting.

"Let's dance" How long has it been since I've heard that?!

And.. since I don't have an account on the forum, I'm going to vote here. My favourite character? It's going to have to be X. *shrug* No idea why. But then Azrael and Sex are pretty close in that combination. Come to think of it, Skell too. You can almost say they're all tied at first.. but X is still my favourite. (Azrael is rapidly catching up though)

In fact, I think my list of favourable characters looks like this:
Xavier
Azrael
Sex
Skell
Armor
Marcus
Liam
Claudius
Hayley
Ping

Well, that's just the top 10.

Ah! And Sex vs. Claudius. Should've known that was coming. Ooh, suspenseful. It'll be a bloody battle, in more ways than one, wouldn't it?

Ahahaha!! Marcus does have a sense of humor. I like the song he picked out for those two ^^ Well at least we all get to see a fight between Azrael and Armor, without the threat of seeing either one of them kill each other. Or do serious damage to one another. Not like Hades. Hmm... for my pick who should win... Armor ^^

Remember what I said in "How do you write? Are you kidding me!!" about the killing of Claudius and what it would do to Sex? I think what Claudius did to Sex at the end of Carmel will get a slighttllly smaller reaction out of him in comparison. Instead of Sex going on a massive rampage, killing/hurting lots of (random) people, Sex will go on a rampage with ONE target in mind, intending to REALLY REALLY REALLY hurt Claudius, just not kill him. The fight with Hades will look like a school yard brawl in comparison to what may be coming with Claudius and Sex. Be afraid Claudius. Be very afraid.

I’m guessing that you mean “He nodded his head in our direction and, there is no other way to say it, stormed out of the gym.” Just left the word out… :) Great chappie, I’m so sorry I didn’t review the last one, I was pretty much pulled away from the computer by family duty. I can’t wait to read about Armor and Azrael FINALLY beating their problems out!! Because Marcus is totally right – everyone-all the brothers- need to be on good terms with everyone else on their side if they’re going to wage a war.
Looking forward to the next chapters, I’m away for three days soon though… but I’m still around! I promise! Hehe

~Spiritxx

Holy cow!!! I was talking about a milking a bottle not a whole cow!!! Can't wait to see Sex and Claudius tête-a tête, I've been waiting for it since the beginning of Clove.

I like this Marcus so much better, he sounds much more fun:P and although a fight between Marcus and Azrael would have been interesting the one with Azrael and Armor, with that soundtrack, will be 'of epic proportions'.

Turn the other cheek!

HA HA HA! MORTAL COMBAT!!!!
I can picture them about to fight and using mortal combat moves. This is so Awesome! OOOH SEX! I miss him and Claudius...hopefully they can make up and be lovers. They were hot together.

So Lex was scared of Marcus because Lex takes after Claudius and probably picked up on the vibes...interesting?

What is wrong with the silent speak for the hell cats I missed that one?
What happened to Shayne and Lois and Lane?
Will Morose be reborn?