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well one thing is sure Haley still is an over grown pup and new he has a pack of puppies to help him jump on X. i loved it!!!!!! it was so funny!!!!

OK then, where to start... First, that fight was something with hair pulling and all the dirty moves, Az and Armor,sure, made a strong brotherly bond. And overall Azrael was just great - he had big bros talk with Lanseng and persuaded Sex to come out and have a reunion with father...
I love new and improved Golden Pheasant - Golden Phoenix (a name is a bit corny, but it suits Hades... really, Hades?) anyway, I love place's decor and how it looks pretty inocent a fist glance but is YAoi haven. Again, I repeat it suits Hades :D
Oh, and Sex... he made me cry. I even managed to forget Skell at one point.(I sure am a sucker for angst) Dark past emerging and Sex's thoughts “Claudius is fucking me good. Claudius is fucking me hard. Harder Claudius, harder.” Claudius will have to put his game face on or he won't even stand a change in upcoming challenge.
Nah.. he doesn't stand a chance no matter what.
P.S. I have this nasty feeling that trying day is not at the end yet.

that was odd!!

Hade in black, blue, violet and red it doesn't go with to color of his hair and eyes. but i guess he will just have to take a shower to wash the red and wait for the rest to heal!!!!

i love this chapter it just out of this world!!!

THANK YOU FOR KICKING HADES SO GOOD!!! TO BAD IT WASN'T A BIS!!!

TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH I WANTED TO BEATTEN I STILL HATED HIM FOR KNELLING FISTIN THE LAST BOOK!!BAD, BAD HADES!!!

BUT KNOW I GOT OVER IT!!!!!!

YEAP !!!THAT IS A GREAT Homecoming!!!

BUT THE KITTY GREATING WASN'T TO GREAT!!!!! WELCOME BOOM!!!!!!ONE TAIL IN THE HEAD!!!!!

OK WHAT IN GOD;S NAME IS GOING ON HERE: Lord Emperor??? WASN'T X BLOOD EMPEROR????

Armor and Azrael could beat each other senseless after dinner when these little ones were in bed. It was good to be home.

THAT IS THE MOST TRUE AND FUNNY THING I EVER HEARED AND READ!!! IWANT TO KEEP READING BUT I CAN'T I HAVE AM IMPORTAT MEATING WITH THE BED, AND I AM SOO LATE!!!

I AM TOO SLEEPY TO BE 100% FOCUSED ON READING. AND TO READ THIS STORY I WANT TO BE AT 110% FOCUSED. SO I WILL JUST KEEP READING TOMORROW.

ANY THIS STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST TOMORROW!!

OH IT VERRY IT SO GOOD TO BE HOME!!!!!!

I love it, I hate it... actually I don't hate it I just feel all sad from the angst. But it'll be interesting to see them fight, I'm excited about that coming up! Poor Sex... all he wants is some love.

Chapter 17 "Brother Blueberry "

I don't know how you manage it but Lanseng is such a
friggin sexy vamp! How tall is this dude again?!
I can almost hear his voice! (Oh no! I'm hearing voices!)

The build up here is killing me!!
Loved the fight between the boys!!
“What the hell is it with you and knees?” HA!
At least he didn't get his nose broken again!!!

Thanks!!
R

"I gimped my way to an expanse of wall and with agony ripping through me, I slid down until my bony ass hit the floor. I held an arm to my ribs. Marcus lurched my way, dragging his leg behind him and flopped down beside me." Do you mean Armor?

gah gah gahhhhh I want to see Skell hunting!!
Next pleeeeeease!!

~Spiritxx

oh my gawd Spirit. Yes, it should be Armor. Well it's not as bad as calling Armor, Marcus during a sex scene with X. That was very very freaky

I will fix.

Thank you

Awesome...the fight was cool!

Man I cant wait for what tomorrow holds.