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Kiix,
I...I just...wow... That chapter was amazing. Gods, the emotion you instilled into Sasha and Sex's meeting was incredible. Writing it must have been like a possession (completely absorbed into the character of the moment, you feel as though it is you). Heart-wrenching and truly wonderful chapter, I cried through the entire last section. I was suprised with Lanseng's intentions towards Skell- he intends to woo Hashmallim eh? That could be interesting.
Great job as usual I look forward to more,
Asyen

This was painful to read. At the end of it, I was actually relieved that Claudius heard Sex's thoughts. It makes everything a lot easier. Misunderstandings is so not needed at this point.

Tears...that was so wonderful and sad at the same time. Kiix your writing is totally awesome and inspiring. I wish i could learn to write as well as you do.

I cant wait for the match, battle, riot that will ensue tomorrow. Lets get it on!

Oh, and by the way. If you suddenly stop getting reviews from me, it's because I'll be travelling around in the US for about 3 months. I'll miss reading this on a regular basis, but on the other hand I'll have a lot to catch up on when I get back. (*drooling slightly at the thought*) My reviews should start appearing again at the end of november.

GUESS WHO???I AM BACK!!!!!!!

I SEE YOU HAVE YOU REWRITE TO WHOLE STORY!!!!!COOL!!!!!!!

LOVE IT JUST LOVE IT!!!!

/I just found your Achilles heel, Skell./

I LOVE THIS SENTECE. SHELL CONSIDER K FAMILY, BECAUSE HE DOESN'T HAVE ANY ONE ELSE. THAT IS SAD!!!

SO HE FINILY LEARN TO PLAY THE PIANO!!!
WHY DID HE DO IT???
SEX HATE CALUDIUS, AND SKELL DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THE PROMISE, SO WHY DID HE LEARNED TO PLAY????

Oh poor poor poor Sex... I'm desperately wanting to believe that Claudius is right, because Sex deserves him. Claudius stepped in because the brothers were too young, that I can believe. Sex is a determined brother, which therefore makes it difficult for him to realize that, and to convince himself that his hurt feelings and broken heart are right, he's pulls up the smallest details that he can interpret to fit his idea. But Claudius's needing another pair of arms instead of Xavier or Azrael.. isn't that just Sex?

Big big big hug to Sex, and thanks Kiix, you've just basically made me cry ;) The mark of an excellent chapter.

~Spiritxx

“They took my key away.”

“You’ll just take it away again. It’s better not to have it at all than just keep losing it over and over.”

THE IS HIS MUSIC, HIS SOUL!!!!!I THOUGHT THAT THE O.W. WERE SMART!!
SO WHY THEY WERE SO STUPID!!! HAVE THEY REALISED THAT THE RAPES, THE TAKING AND GIVING OF THE KEY WILL LET TO A MENTAL BREAK DOWN!!!!!!!!!

Did they think that he was strong enough to resit all that torture??????

And a question keeps bugging me, did Andrew take that key because he wanted HURT S. or was he ordered to take it???

he is free i am so glad!!!!!!!

well lanny found a new obsession.

love it just love it!!!!!!