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My body began to spasm.

SO THAT MEANS THE SAME THING WILL HAPPEN TO SEX WHEN HE DRINK BLOOD FOR THE FRIST TIME???
if the body was at only 1/3 of it treu potential, would sex need human blood to go at 3/3.????

"I got Sasha by default."

that is so sad but i don't think is true, he just think that because he is hurt.right??

"His hair was longer than I remembered."

how is that possible??? i thought that only x hair grow so fast when goes phonix.

"I turned and dropped into reverent pose."

what is the significance of this?? i mean the true segnificance of it??? i think i understand what it means but i can't put my finger on it!!

"The unease that lingered in the body regarding the shower.." "...you can cry out your heartache and no one will know just how fucked up your life truly is."

So that means that the shower has become the simbol of not only abuse and rape but also the one of suffering and saddness???

yeah I know a lot of question but hey i was gone a very long time and i have to recuperate, a lot!!!

love the chapther and the story!!!!!

Hello,kiix!
I love your polls,hope that there is going to be a new one soon.
I'm so glad that Sex is finnaly out,I loved this chapter very much.I'm sure that the fight will be a nasty thing.I'm not sure if Sex alone can kick Claudius' ass,but I'd like for him to at least do some damage.Go,Sexy,go!!!
I am eagerly awaiting the new chapter,even checking every couple of hours!

ps:I so like your Hellcats!You did a wonderfull job with their personalities,I have 6 cats myself,so I know how bitchy they tend to be when you do something to piss them off.So yeah...

Hugs,Darma!!!

I don't review every time and perhaps I should. This a wonderful, thought provoking story. You have such depth within your characters. I find it amazing that you update almost daily. You write so much within each chapter and I feel like I know the characters. With some stories, even the best of ones, you may feel like you're living side by side with the characters. Yet, I'm sure I'm not the only audience member who truly feels that they are living this--feeling the brothers emotions and living their lives through them. Besides the point that this is a story of vampires, it is very realistic. The characters are emotional and real and your audience can relate to them. So congratulations on your stories. They are truly great and I think you should look into getting them published, if you haven't already. You have such a large audience right here on aff I can only imagine what it would become outside of this web site! Good luck!

Chapter 18 "Golden Phoenix"

Great, great chapter!!
Sex's angst was delicious, as was Claudius' despair.

(Whoops! Thought Lanseng was a Seer/Vampire, thanks for
the heads up!)

I gotta shower! I feel so dirty!!

Thanks,
R

Woot!! Another update. Would have reviewed last time but was away at a con so didn't have time. Btw, are you going to post a Q/A and kudos for 17/154?

*hugs* Poor Sex!! He's suffering soo much angst love *cuddles* I still think Claudius is in for a world of hurt at the battle though. One night of sex (even if he came three times) won't do anything to help to situation too much really, even if it was HOT. They need to bash themselves in, heal, and then work it out.

Okay that's it. Still suffering from post-con activities. *hugs* Keep on writing

oooh another chappie i send u many cookies and a plea to the muses that you still have a lot of inspiration in the hopes we get another chappie tomorrow :)

Sniff, I liked that chapter. I wonder what happened, if Liam exercised his 'paternal rights' and gave Claudius a lecture. Somehow I got the impression the differences between Sex and Claudius work a wedge between him and Hades. They seem to cheer for different parties. I hoped Hades would give the little emperor a training lesson in 'how to beat our Claudius' but hardcore-royalist and infatuated with Claudius as Hades is, that might not come to happen. Liam on the other hand is a wildcard. You never know what to expect; he could do either one.

I guess Hades himself painted Sex. No ... I hope, he did. Please don't end the Phoenix-episode here; I'm dying to know what happens during/after the shower. The brothers and Hades need a face to face. Poor Honeybee was actually a little cold to Sex and that after the show he put on with Claudius and which I'm sure of he enjoyed ... or maybe not so much. He has and had feelings for both wing-vamps. At least Liam is de-feathered and Hades for once doesn't need to fear he flies up and away, committing mayhem etc.

Now I go and make an offering to the muses. Hopefully inspiration stays longer - it's sooooooooo hard to wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

It seems I can't stay away from your boys. If that fight isn't an excellent opportunity for Claudius to make up with the loyal, I don't know. He really has no chance to win if Sex was serious and thus, phoenixed father but I doubt Sex likes his beloved fried (no chance to get the stench of grilled feathers of your skin anytime soon). Seeing and realizing just how earnest Sex is with the whole ordeal and how grown up, Claudius should submit to him AFTER a serious fight, without being already on the floor (emotional floor not involved). And no matter what, eldest brothers ought to bring tissues. Well, that's how I imagine it unless you provide us with your surely stunning and enjoyable version of the big bang fight. Soon please!

Oh, question, has the new playground a mooveable roof or a (sort-of) arena where the royal blue house-members can stretch their wings in an air fight? Someplace or other Claudius must have learned to use his wings and I doubt the hunters gave him clearance to the barn (if they even rebuilt it).

On chp. 154,
During the fight I had was humming a 'passo doble' all the way through and I like this new camaraderie between Azrael and Armor.
There's something really sweet bout a grown man/seer saying "Thank you for taking my virginity":P And do I sense Skell and Lanseng being the new bondage bunnies?
Awww and poor Edna, I liked her; it's been some years a few people are bound to die along the way, neh? Still she was too cool! Long Live Edna!

On chp 155, Hades club fits him perfectly; the young fresh first face, to a kinky second layer and a dark perverted core!But it sounds like a very interesting club.
About Claudius and Sex I am a big pile of mush, you're milking right the way I like it. Poor, poor Sex, I got goosebumps during their interaction, that song fits so perfectly its scary (funny the 'keep the vampires from your door' line) *gives Sex a time machine so he can travel back to happier moments with his Sasha*

Poor Sex, hes become a tragic emo songT_T