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schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love happy endings;] (please behave on part two)
person Cindyip
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weddings always make me cryT_T
person Ciar
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just.. wow! ^^ I haven't been reviewing, but I have been reading this story from the beggining and I sure as hell will stay with you to the very end!
But! I don't think you need a second part to this epilogue, it's perfect with an open ending. I will ofcourse read the second part anyway and probably love it. Just a thought.
I'll just be sitting here, waiting for the next book, Britta's going down together with Orel Wessel, right?
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGZ OMGZ OMGZ YAY! SEX'S WEDDING! =all but gushes= I'M SO HAPPY! =starts sobbing tears of joy= i absolutely LOVE the super happy Epilogue! (though i /am/ a bit weary of the 2nd part... i hope nothing /bad/ happens like the last book! ...gah) ANYWAYS! Congrats again for your contract and i'm so proud to say that i've been following your story since the 2nd book (and would have from the 1st if i found out about your story earlier) and got to review your stories~

I also can't wait for the next book and i'm sure it'll be as wonderful as the rest. And wonderful i mean when i come home from a day of school and stress and go to your page to see and update, it automatically makes me smile with excitement and then makes me forget my problems and stress just by reading the new chapter =sighs happily=. So i can't wait for part 2 (...though i really /do/ hope nothing bad happens!!!!) of the Epilogue and the next book.

With Luv,
m i l k x ness

ps. Cake is going to come out in a real book right? =wicked glint= i totally want to buy it and get your autograph!!! muahahhaa...

... please?
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So then since this one is just about over are you doing to make another one?
person steph291
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I'm, like, DREADING reading this epilogue, because I know something BAD is going to happen! couldn't even enjoy it. =p please surprise me and make it all happy! =)
person mystic87
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Brilliant ending! I absolutely loved it (almost as much as I love little Sasha!!). So do you have plans for another story? I can't wait to read more of your work. Their wedding was amazing!
person laur
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOD!

I bow down to you Kiix. I will buy Cake as soon as it comes out.

Thanks so much for the story kiix. I loved it.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GIRL POWER!!! You go Claudia!

Oh no it has come to an end! It was a hell of a ride, thankfully there will be a book 5, because I cannot bear to part with all your delightful characters and insightful plot. Hurry up that editing so you can come back to writing and all the best with your publishing ordeal.

P.S.: Don't you dare leave us with a cliffie epilogue!
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooOOoo nice ending to all this mess and i'm glad that it's finally over in a way. I was completely outraged when the cute little Alexander was threatened! I was all like 'GO Claudia! Kick that b*tch's a**! ROARRRRRRR!!' and practically did a victory dance when she grounded that crazy woman into the ground!

I was a bit surprised that Claudia is the Leader now but in a way not... at the same time if you know what i mean. I was surprised but i think that was very reasonable. I can't really imagine Xavier wanting to be the Leader of the Blood Nation when he /just/ reunited with his family and still have much to catch up on. And Claudius basically got his oh-so-fine booty kicked for being the Emperor before so i doubt he would want the position again so Claudia was a fine choice; with those fund raisers and throwing her happiness away for the Empire and such. The only thing is (as the this chapter has proven) that she's a bit too trusting and in a way, somehow feels a bit weird. But i think it's only because i, as a reader, am more in tune with Xavier, Sex, Azreal, Skell, and Claudius while not as much with Claudia so maybe the idea is still a bit foreign. But this really does makes since when i think about it because she's only holding the position as the Leader until Xavier grows up a bit so she's not the Leader permanently so that's kinda like the icing on the last slice of cake if you know what i mean.

...but then again... (ung sorry) Xavier (and the gang) has been dealt and been dealing with so much, more than any fledging has and in the end he's still soaring up high and looking fine and sexy to boot! (this kinda reminds me of Harry Potter since Harry's so young and he still has to deal with ending Voldamort's reign) So maybe he /is/ ready but just needs some more time with his family before he actually becomes the Leader? Ungg... i don't know anymore. Now apart of me just wish this whole Leader thing is gone so that everyone lives happily ever after! and eliminate all this stress over whose the Leader and whose not =___=;; but all in all, i enjoy the story and hope that... =big puppy dog eyes= THERE'LL BE MORE!! GAHHH!!!

I'm actually more surprise with Thomas the head of the Council thingy thing and noticed that at one point Liam was gonna approach? I wonder if he was approaching to deny it? or confirm it? Hmm.. i totally want to know. And don't get me wrong that i'm happy with the story and ending but for some reason all this is going really fast ;__; and i'm not sure why. Maybe it's just that this book mostly has the whole OW captivity and then fight fight fight and bloodshed when he returns and not much in depth with the plot and the little detail? Hmm... not sure about that either but well... another book's supposedly coming out right? =gringringrin= so i'm happy! :3

Hopefully the next book will also have some smut action and, of course, with your lovely smutty boys in tow. SO! to wrap up my rambling! I didn't mean to be offensive! Those are just the thoughts that pass through my mind when i was reading the latest chappie and thought maybe you would want to hear them. =huggles= love this story and luv you and awaits for more~

Always your fan,
m i l k x ness