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person Rorarin
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so exciting I had to read it twice!
person Cindyip
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mo is back?! How? O.O
person Rosei
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 "The Wind-up"

Oh my god! OH MY GOD!!!!
This is all soooo EXCITING!!!!
You've got me all WOUND UP!!!! HA!!!!

Love that Sex is soooo sexy evil!!!!
Can't wait! Can't wait!! CAN'T WAIT!!!!

Thanks,
R
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant wait please write fast :D
person k
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sex & brothers + wings = Phoenix = Sex wins, or not? Holy blue hellcat! That was cool a start.

Maybe later more. One little remark: Great-grandfather is: Прадедушка (Pradeduschka)

Love it!
person Cindyip
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blink* let the games begin:)
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sex going in for a kill with that outfit!!! >.<
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Claudius reaction to Sex's outfit,"We could postpone the challenge until you can get real fighting leathers made". People use to fight naked at he is wearing something *laugh*
person Spirit
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapt 22:

Awwww!!! I love his reuniting with the litters!! And I love the blue hair.. though when he uses the healing light, won't it all grow back and be white again? Hmmm. I can't wait to read about the fight. I love how this chapter was a little light, even though he did do some reflecting, and now the next chapter is the challenge. Weee!!!

~Spiritxx
person Spirit
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapt. 23/159:

Omg.. Aaaah you evil person Kiix!!! I wanted the fight now, not the pre-fight!! grrrr I can't wait now till the REAL fight, not all the preliminary I'm-not-backing-down-are-you? stuff!!
Great writing, though without your own computer, your haven't faltered at all, kudos!!

~Spiritxx