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Kiix,
Ooh...nicely done fight scene---he he the damn jets will get you every time... I do hope the boys are ok with that crash landing (loved the healing light shield, that was too kewl). So Skell had a protective barrier and was holding back strength? Wonder why and how. And yeah!!! Morose is back!!! Pretty please continue and soon!!!
Avid fan as always,
Asyen

Chapter 24 "Emperor Vs Emperor"

Oh my god!! Sex is toast!!
Very exciting winged actioned flight fight!!!
You've got me so hooked!!!

Loved that they had there little moment
together under the falling debris!

What happens next?! They're not on a cliff
but they might as well be!!!

Can't wait! Can't wait!! CAN'T WAIT!!!!

Thanks,
R

Damn....what is going to happend? Kiiiixxxx...your such a meany. I am so stuck in anticipation. Will Claudius win or Sex? What is going to happen to them? Will they survive????

I am in awe. That fight scene was beautifully written, and Sex's desperate attempt at not only keeping a cool head, but also saving unconscious Claudius is amazing. So Sex has won? Does crashing and falling unconscious count as a defeat? Am eargerly awaiting the next part. And the cliffhanger in the last chapter was definitely worth this one :)

~Spiritxx

you're evil. evil incarnate! how could you leave us there! soooo cruel!!!!!!! >o<

Awesome fight with grand finalle. I've read the chapter twice, but as soon as I'm done with expressing my amazement I'll reread it :D
From the first lines the fight was intense and it started getting even better when Sex expanded the playgroud. I knew something was off with Skell's shield (actually every loyal knew, after you mentioned that little bit about his metal wings being sign that something is off and most probably guessed it was connected with hellcats problem ), but I never thought that it could be holding brothers strength down.

The plane was unexpected bit I've read it and when reread it, but it still left me in pleasant aftershock how even after 100+ chapters you can still surprise your readers :D No really that one was probably the most shocking and unexpected bit in this chapter :)

Finally, the heartouching ending :) That was so sweet! I instantly remembered when father asked "Just how big is your heart fallen?" - that was then Sex said he wanted to name his son Alexander. All the time he does something like that it think - if only I weren't so into dark broken and insecure characters... Not only that, but he really found ingeious solution in that stressful situation like that time whan Sacha was dead...

Anyway, all in all it was a fair fight which Sex kind of won. But, in the beggining it was said the winner must be clear. Will the fact that he first regained consiousness and saved Sasha's life be considered a clear victory ? Oh, and I also wonder, how Sex is feeling - I was allmost expecting a blood frenzy in the end. Also, I can't wait to fing out what will father say?

Sorry for rambling. Love and can't wait for more :D

Natana

I am in love with your stories, and I hop the bastards that broke into your home die slowly. -.- I love your style, though, so keep on writing babe! (Also, who are some of your favorite authors?)

Oh my god...O_O need I say more? Wickedly written! You're worse than me at the cliffhangers lady!!! *rethinks her protests and thinks of the one she just left....* err.... right, *hands the authoress some strawberry pocky in appeasement and as a bribe*

yep...worth the wait

but your such a bitch for stopping there :P

WOW, that's one kicka** fight. Brilliant and wonderfully written and I usually don't like fight scenes, they tend to be boring and uninteresting, but yours was amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

btw Starwars geek, here too:P