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Damn...he was fucked up. Now he is going after Liam. Crap. X is on a mission. What will the children think?

Thank God he's alright...I was panicking for a moment there...anyway love it! update soon.

*Sigh* All hail Emperor X(^_^)

Oh,Finally!!!The long expected fight.
Great chapter,I especially liked that part when Claudius shielded Sex with his wing,I think I actually had some tears in my eyes.I can't wait to see how this is going to end.And Mo is back?How and when did that happen?Did I miss something?I'll have to go back and re-read some chapters.
Great job,Kiix!As always,of course!!! :o)

Hugs,Darma!

AWWWW!!! That was an evil evil ending.... i wanna see what happens! =P Anywayz so if Sex was the one who brought Claudius to the ground... does that mean hes the winner even if hes unconscious now?

I loved the fight.It is scary how strong he really is. If he was full power the whole time Claudius wouldn't have stood a chance. I also hate you so much we you just leaving us there. I was going "no there has to be more. Where is the rest of the page." You can't do that to me!!! It's is very cruel!
I also loved "I opened my eyes to find a huge black wing arched over me protecting me from steel and chunks of concrete." I was near crying it was so romantic. Yes they are trying to kill each other for the same reason. It just proves more that Claudius is the sword not the hand. A sword can block a blow a hand can't. I really love this story and will be checking twice a day waiting for your next chapter.

I am not going to rant at you today. I can't wait for your August to be over. You have been dumped on a pit but you have a ladder and the light so all you can do is start climbing out.
-HallowsEve

p.s
"By the Power of Greyskull" I love you so much for putting that in. I was cheering at my screen! woot!

Oh my god, where have I been?!

Well, it's been so busy I can't believe I'm sane. I've wanted to come check out your updates, but I had too little time to spare.. luckily enough, I have a day off of work tomorrow, so I stayed up late to catch up. And I am SO glad I did.

Here are my collected reviews:

Ch. 18 Golden Phoenix

I bawled like a baby from Sex's thoughts. Now my throat feels all scratchy, and I blame you. Poor Sex... that's one painful heartbreak.

Ch. 19 Author's Note

I'm very very sorry about that. I hate thieves with a passion. I don't care if they have their drugs, or they shoot each other dead... but why do they have to push their miseries onto other people? Fucking assholes. And your tupperware too?! What the hell is wrong with them?!

Ch. 20 A Honeybee; a Wolfhound and a Pussycat

Wow, this was a rather.. surprising chapter. I'm surprised that Skell was so comfortable, and so loving. And I was surprised at Sex's appearance over at the Penthouse. Hmm, now I have to see what's up.. *hurries to read Ch. 21* (PS: Oh joy! The Pussycat Doll shirt and Kitty ears)

Ch. 21 Sexasha Healing

Love the reference to the song. And it's cute how you can put Claudius and Sex's name together. (Remember when I tried to do that for Hades and Liam... gosh, that was dreadful). It's nearing 1 in the morning, but I'm determined to keep reading. You do terrible things to me, you know? Anyways, I'm happy to see Sex and Claudius on such good terms.. and the bit about dinner was a nice touch. It was a good way to let everyone know that there will be no bitterness regarding their relationship after the challenge.

Ch. 22 Sex on the City

I have to admit... I love this as much as the battles. Why? I'm not sure... maybe it's how carefree it is? Plus, this just proves that the Brothers can handle both family and nation.

Ch. 24 Emperor vs Emperor (What happened to my Ch. 23 review? No idea)

That was UNBELIEVABLE. I thought of many ways this could end, but this was NOT one of the possibilities. You never cease to amaze me, and dammit, I love that. Dear dear Sex... this is so typical of him, isn't it? Doing something so rash to protect the one he loved.. of course, I do have to admit it was smart of him to think of the shield. I was surprised with how quickly Skull learned to dismantle his shield. How did Mo get to the arena anyways? Or did he, at all? Ah, I also find this a little ironic. Claudius is always trying to protect the Brothers, now take a look... it's the other way around. Ought to really knock some sense into the big oaf, huh?


I love you, and your wonderful, wonderful writing.

PS: I was a little surprised by what Liam said about Sex being stronger than he was at full power. I mean, I sorta knew that already, but having it said out loud.. is a completely different story.

I forgot your middle name - 'evilness' and I won't have internet for a week. I will so die out of curiosity.

That part was pretty amazing. I wonder if Claudius and Sex will meet on the beach - all knocked out, with Claudius actually seeing all of his 'quadruplet' little Emperors at once. Technically Claudius was k.o. first, but have the witnesses witnessed it? Where is the Hades-rescue-squad?

Loved that chapter, loved the heat shild, especially loved Claudius sheltering Sex with his wing from the debris.

Why "the end of the House of Assassins." ? Is Sex going to destroy the House or re-arrange it?

Thank you for that lovely piece of writing, go on!