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damn it damn stupid cliff hanger. o.O btw i do like the twist i was expecting a lovely dove scene with hugs and kisses and the ever so present sex.

Ch. 25 Buster

Eep, I'm really sorry about my MIA. Will you ever forgive me?

This chapter gave me a warm feeling. I've missed this feeling. Funnily enough, I was reminded of Lion King when Sex was walking back.. Shade was roaring.. and everyone dropped into reverent pose. Don't ask how it's related, but that's what I thought of. Weird? Maaaybe.

Ah.. the X-ray vision thing. So there are other abilities such as these? Interesting. Did you think of it beforehand, or did you just pull it out of your ass? And if there's such a thing as X-ray vision, would there be vampires who can control the elements (water, wind, fire, earth), and other such things? I think I got a little confused about Claudius' ability to "recreate" (or rearrange?) Sex's hips. I thought that was strictly shield-wise? I seriously missed something here, didn't I?

Er...I'm sorry to post this here, but since I like your characters very much and I keep on imagining how they look like, and fortunately I stumbled upon a picture who may look like Claudius(yeah, I'm head over heels for him) --> http://heise.deviantart.com/art/D-14-59629260
or Carnage --> http://heise.deviantart.com/art/Tame-tigers-the-portrait-20198083
And I do believe that Claudius looks much much better than Armand in InterviewWithTheVampire...There was the WORST WIG EVER... -__-
This is the first time I post a review for you, even though I regularly checked AFF twice a day only to look at any progress on your story. I can't find any better words to say to you except that: YOU'RE SO BLOODY AMAZING. Your story are so addictive, the characters are so real(apart from the wings, hellcats, and so on), your writing style are so lively and enjoyable(yeah, there are sarcasm, tears, joy and love mingled together to make it lively). Simply said, I LOVE YA. Keep your gorgeous work...!!! ^.* v

"Where is home?" "Wherever you are". Oh my Gackt, I actually shivered and smiled like crazy XD. Great chapter as always.

Awwww omg poor Sex!!!! By far the worst injury he's ever had. I love how you kept both of them alive (there was NO WAY I was going to let you kill Claudius), and how it's all going back into place now.
Can't wait to hear about SAXSk's further adventures! Now that he's officially recognized as Lord Emperor... Waah I want to know what's up with Britta!! And how SAXSk's going to manage OW.
:D kudos for a great chapter!

~Spiritxx

This one was sad... i don't know whether it is just me in lonely little room with music that sucks, or if it is the chapter that gave me the impression. But the ending left me wet eyed.
The war is approaching. Sacrifices and death are soon to follow the brothers. No more... It may be true that I was the one cheering for revenge and action earlier, but now, then one can almost hear it breathing from behind one's neck, now I don't want it.
Sex... I think i would have prefered the blood starvation - a sea of suffocating pain and no one's at fault. Well, Sasha is.. but how can one get angry at someone who is feels guilty, who knows exactly what he's done and takes full responsibility. But... this pain was a price for love.. so it's Ok?
Skell... the things he went through ...and now again... I don't want this war, and revenge, but ... I need it. They hurt him, they pay.
Not only that, but then one fights to protect - ( inocent fledgings in this case) ... then one fights to protect - it's heartthrobingly beautiful ...

I'm so happy it all worked out between them. thanks for the new chapters

YAY! I come back from a week of classes to find this lovely story! I absolutely LOVED the fight, I've been waiting for it for so long! It'll be interesting to see how the next chapter goes, though!

Chapter 25 "Buster"

Fine dramatic chapter!!
I am amazed at how you've keep all those details
in your head after all these chapters!!
(ie Claudius' bone shield!!)Wow!!

You've really mastered the gymnastics of all
these characters and all the transitions/shifting
that goes on is all so seemless!! Wow!!
Back to re-reading the last few chapters!!!

Thanks!!
R

It was a really healing chapter, those injuries must've hurt like hell *ouch*
Lol on the Mythbusters reference!