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THAT IS SAD.

Claudius left because S called him Alexander, no???

beacuse i can't find an other explication!!

man just when I thought they had fix it. it turns out even worst. poor thing I just want to hug him.

hi, I've decided to review before I fall over dead from sleep exhaustion. Umm.. just finished book 2 and will be starting book 3 shortly, but just wanted to say that this is a great story and you've kept me up all night reading it, LOL ^^ I'll probably review more later once I acutally get to book 4

Hiks hiks, stop it already....Why won't you let Sexasha be happy...??? Why are you always trying to make Claudius a big jerk..??? Even when everyone cursed him and called him an asshole at the end of book 3, I still kept my faith that you originally created Claudius as a loving father and no way he can instantly turns into an asshole on a whim, I know there must be a reason (which we all know later that the reason is Liam and his honeybee provoking Claudius' sense of fatherhood, I don't blame Claudius for this though, it must be ultra cool to have a papa like him)....But this time, I really don't know what to say about Claudius, didn't he JUST mention that he'll be Sex's sword? Never thought that the sword will be a double edged sword... -__- Poor Sex, it must hurt sooooo much, please someone help Sex...Please don't let him go in the dark... --> which reminds me, didn't Claudius ever promised not to let Sex go in the dark? Because what seems to me is that Claudius is now sending Sex into a bottomless abyss... -__- Sasha, is saying pretty empty promises the only one you can do good at...?Now you looks like a perfect JERK to meeeeeeeeee....Stop hurting each other and hurting US...!!!! >__<
Well, whatever happens, I still keep my faith that you'll settle things in a very good way...That's what you've done so greatly in the past...No matter what terrible events happened, you've always been successful in handling it in a very good way...

Chapter 26 "Cruelty"

Holy MolY!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!
This is exactly what these two needed!!!
Clear the air! Say your piece!
Shred your loved one to pieces!!!
Tear/claw their heart out!!! Yeow!

(Yaoi!!?)

Beautifully painful and delicious! Wow!
(I hope OW are NOT waiting outside with a giant
net!)

Thanks!
R

Ok I didn't even see this one coming. I was shocked and had to read it three times. I couldn't believe what happened. I love Claudius but if I ever meet him I would happy rip his heart out. I would also slap Sex for being a heartless asshole. He could have been nicer about it. They both need the shit kicked out of them.

Oh no. no no no no no no Seeeeeeeeeeeex!!!! He mustn't kill himself, please please tell me instinct took over and his wings flapped. *waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah*!!!!!! No, he's endured so much for Claudius, I hate Claudius right now, he keeps turning away from Sex and pushing him away. He knows him so damned well and he STILL apparently can't overlook a name. Sex shouldn't've called him 'Alexander', but still!!! meh. Hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!!

~Spiritxx

....O_O What the hell, Sex!? Claudius!? I'm confused T_____T. Xavier better come out and fix this (In Xavier I trust), no kidding about the dark part for this chapter...
And it's going to continue in the next one? I might not survive this.

Why can't Claudius do anything right? Aw, poor Sex. Hope the next chappie comes soon!

Now that was a powerful chapter.

For the first time in this whole series I have felt really moved for a character. The initial part of the chapter felt a little wordy but the intensity of Sex's betrayal and pain and loss was overwhelming. I even managed to overcome the bad spelling. I do hope that you are going to make Carnage pay for that mistake and not turn it onto Sex again. After everything that Sex has been through recently he deserves a lover who will think of him and Sasha/Carnage/"Alexander" was just plain cruel. it seems as though Sex is finally learning and maturing as a character, dealing with pain and loss and becoming strong. I do hope you will allow him to remain strong (sexy slut too...but still strong).

PS I like the antiseptic/anesthetic references :) (Science junkie)

PPS May I please plead for more character development from Az/Marcus. At the moment it seems as though Marcus has matured but we haven't really seen it. He does all the boring administrative work and gets none of the action (bunny or otherwise). Az has been ditched for someone bigger and badder and is essentially an undeveloped character

Oh and maybe more Skell. I think he is getting lost behind Sex/Carnage angst and (like Az) is .in danger of becoming a shallow plot device :(

Bravissima (esp when you are struggling with breaking/computerless mayhem)