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"I am your Sasha" Hell yeah!!! Ooh I knew Skell was Hashmallim!!!! Yeah to kiix for another fantastic chapter-- not as dark as the last one (I don't think your loyal would appreciate the killing of our Sex, so yeah thanks on that one!) I loved that Skell stepped up from little bro to alpha, that was great *knocks some sense into Sex*
Great Job as usual,
Asyen

So Skell is the Hashmallim... hmm, an interesting turn. I'm glad that Claudius and Sex made up, but WOW I don't trust that guy anymore! Good chapter, though it seemed rather short.

Oh dear what poor broken souls! Their broken pieces should fit together, neh? Still you need to milk it more Kiix (this milking was only enough to dunk the cookie), as difficult it is for me to see and feel Sex and Sasha despairing, it all feels empty if a "simple" talk on a beach seems to solve it all. I don't dislike the end result I just think it should've taken a lot more time to solve; it didn't even needed to be written, you have enough characters to fill the void and keep the rest of the story going (speak of which I miss Armor preferably with Xavier) and give them time to grieve and hurt. Just my thoughts though.

Interesting,please more soon. Skell rocks:)

Chapter 27 "Life is a Beach"

I know I keep saying it but
these two guys are soooo good
together. There is nothing like
two people who can tear one another
apart and with a few minutes heal their
hearts with plenty of tears.

Great chapter Kiix!
Love the brothers, love Sasha,
love SEX, love the ending!

Thanks,
R

Poor Claudius. He doesn't seem to have much emotional experience, probably due to walling himself up in his bone shield, and is sure messing up with Sex. I don't blame him for running though. Sex had just told him his love was inadequate and lacking. That would tear my heart out if some one I loved told me that. Then Sex wanted him to open his mind up and share his inner self him? He has only bad experience with that and he was just hurt, I'd run too. When you love some one, your most basic instint is to protect them, that was what Claudius was trying to do for Sex, but he went about it the wrong way. Sex needs to realize that Claudius did what he did out of love and protection, not because he thought Sex was incapable. If you only see some one as a sex toy or whore, you don't usually shield them with your life. Sex and Claudius need a third party to help them out. Where's Lanny? Or maybe couples counceling?

Hi again, just finished Book 3 and about to start on book 4. All that I have to say is the ending to book 3 was fucking awesome. Kudos

Short review, but I just wanted to comment on how everyone is now against Cladius. I...personally am not. Though I totally wasn't for him taking over as Lord Emperor or any of that - I can understand why he left just now. Sex called him Alexander, which really wasn't very nice as far as I could see. The only other real time I remember Sex calling him Alexander was at the end of Book 3 when he'd left.

So, it really doesn't seem to be the appropriate name to use, especially in that situation. Thus, I really don't feel too bad for Sex in this chapter but more for Cladius.

Okay, sorry about not reviewing for a bit. Work kinda got busy and got tired and yeah. But I was always reading!! *hugs* *drops off lots of pocky + loveeeee*

OMG!! Claudius, do you really WANT a bunch of very angry fangirls going after you!! You..... you keep doing STUPID SHIT!!!! ARG!!! I mean, ya mean well and all but *sigh* Gez. Well, at least this proves an earlier statement of mine: this book is all about Sex angst/drama/pain. There's a little Skell angst/pain but Sex gets the focus of it all. Seeing the pattern, Skell will have 5 to feature his angst/pain/suffering. Assuming that Skell doesn't go poof by the end of this one.

Kudos for the last few chapters, I glad to see that you are trying to develop all the characters a little in this new book. A lot more needs to be developed to let us feel how each of the brothers survived and how they are healing with their mates. If this whole book is about them getting back their lives and healing the fractures that was caused by their capture of OW with their loved ones and also
Control of the nation, it will be fine by me... Let the next book be about how they destroy OW and the big bad wolf. (Hint, hint) …
I didn’t like seeing Sex forgive so easily and have sex with Claudius in the club... Great sex scene but I want to see Claudius suffer more, especially after what he did to the brothers by taking over as the emperor. I feel that Claudius is a loving father, but brain dead as a lover and mate. I liked the twist having Liam and Hades being behind Claudius fatal mistake. This actually makes a lot of sense, cant
Wait to see the trashing of Liam by Skell. And considering how the boys are going to be now that Claudius screwed up once more with sex. Boy oh boy is he going to get a good whipping.
Anxiously, awaiting the next chapter to read your explanation of why Claudius booted out of there. As much as I would like sex to take it slow in forgiving him I am having , problems seeing him do that after all sex has been thru., especially after he almost died saving his life. Sex, telling him what he did shouldn’t have made him leave…So what is that devious mind of yours up too? Promising to be his sword
one moment and leaving because sex told him his feelings??/ This latest betrayal will also put the Xavier, Azrael, and also Skell against him for awhile until he smartens up.
Oh well with sex and Claudius fighting. Hopefully this will give more time to my favorites Xavier and Armor. (In the bed room of coarse).
Marcus and Azrael, need a little more time also and devolvement of their characters. Azrael was supposed to be a strong brother, but truthfully he is losing it, why?? Love the fact that Marcus has grown up
And didn’t give up on his love for Azrael... the closet scene was hysterical, t-shirt priceless. Please don’t let Azrael fade away… Give him some dam power lol.
Skell also needs more story time. Now that he is away from OW, I want to see what he is made of. The Whipping that is coming hopefully will be a good start.
Keep up the story line your painful last chapter hurt but was well written.. Just impatient to see were your going with the whole group.please dont keep us waiting long.
p.s.
sorry to hear about the robbery and hope things are working better for you in future.

aurora0821