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Tch. Another week gone, another miserable story.. from me. Unfortunately.. I got terribly sick, and so I rested for the latter half of the week, including the weekend. My laptop must've felt so abandoned, poor thing. However, that meant I got a couple of delicious chapters in one. For the past hour or so, I was on an emotional rollercoaster: satisfied, horrified, terrified, and.. any other -fied emotion you can give me. It doesn't matter how many books I may have on my reading list... your story always tops it.

Ah.. BDSM fetish show? Hmm.. I wonder what Sex may be wearing.. or not wearing. By the way, I hope you plan to expand that show.. because that was way too short to satisfy my liking. I-want-Sex-on-the-walk! Yum.

By the way, you really fucked my emotions over when you took the Hashmillan goodies away from Sex. I swear, I could've cried.

So, I've come up with a title for the now-title-less Sex.

Azrael, Angel of Death
Skull, Hashmallin
Xavier, Destroyer of Nations? (I forgot? Oops..)
Sex, Drama Queen

Don't we all just love our dear little Drama Queen?

I know I should not be here, since I was quite obviously deleted by the current admin, Jaxxy, but here I am. I have read chapter 22 finally and it was quite lovely, if I do say so myself. So sorry for falling behind on you, but I'm quite sure you can understand why now... In any case, I'm here now anyway, and until the day they block all anon. users or you post on another site, I'm here for this story, since why should I miss out on all the good writing I worked so hard to keep in working order on this site for so long?

omg...I thought I was gonna have to jump in there and kill someone lol! I love that scene though. keep it comin! Ja!

The Merchant of Venice - always good for a reference. I so love Shakespeare, though not all that's currently attributed to him.

Good chapter - I'm glad Claudius revealed his point of view. That was past due and they haven't even cut to the chase. Oh oh, poor blue-boys.

Quote, '(...)Liam tried to be nice about it, but the satisfaction that just emanated off of him and Hades was too much.(...)' unquote.

That sentence stopped me cold. You didn't actually mean Liam and Hades were glad about the brothers being gone??? I hope you meant they were emanating happiness because of them being together. Please enlighten me on that point because I find it out of character, if Hades was happy about Sex vanishing.

Finally the Lady-sword made an appearance and claimed Hashmallim. I feel sorry for Sex but I'm still of the opinion Skell is a part of him, that isn't meant to stay. It is Sex' way of handling the hardest shit - wedge off a part of his self as another 'brother', who is befitted to meet the responsibilities at hand. But Skell seems different from Azrael and Xavier - since he emerged, Sex is nothing like he used to be and not because of the overwhelming heartache - he doesn't seem to be his 'complete' personality (stupid ... ironic ... whatsoever).

I like the turn of the story. Thank you for the update!

Hello kiix! :)
I am a bit behind but I am catching up.I’ve been busy with my exams and will be for the entire next week,but I’m making some time to read and review some of my favourite stories.
I am kind of glad that the challenge part ended the way it ended.I hope that Claudius is aware of the fact how lucky he is to have Sex and his undying love.He nearly fucked it all up once again.Sex sure as hell has the heart the size of the universe,and that ability to forgive is absolutely admirable.
But what I liked the most is the mere tought of Liam at the stone of punishment.Hell,if I could,I’d whip his sorry ass myself.And Hades?Honeybee would benefit from a few strikes as well.I used to like these two old perverts,but I am not so sure anymore.And I thought that they like the brothers,and that Hades has a thing for Sex,but now,I’m confused.
I am sure you will clear this up,and that everything will be explained.I honestly can’t wait for the Lord Emperor to start dealing some long awaited justice.I think that the X/A/S/S’s iron fist is what is needed right now.
Thank you for these great chapters,and I can’t wait to see what will happen next!!!

Hugs,Darma!!! :)

" Skell lifted Endellion up toward the sky. Thunder clapped and the whole beach rattled like we were in a terrarium. “What the hell is this thing and why is she calling me Hash whatever?” " Aaaaah definitely one of the best endings to a chapter I've ever read. I'm so happy Claudius and Sex have made up!!! And that Claudius was able to share with him. I wish we mere humangs could do that *pouts*. But Sex is in deeeep doo-doo with his brothers.
Can't wait for more!!! =)

~Spiritxx

Okay, A) I love you~!!!

B)Why do you do that?~? Your promised fluffy damnit~! xD Nah, I love it.

I love your stuff, and I can't wait till the next installment. Luff you~!

--Shattered

Damn...the destruction starts. Bring it on!

Oooooh Lord! I've just read all four books in a week minus three days (where my Internet was gone. No nice experience.), and I think I might worship you; I LOVE the way you write. There is some grammar errors here and there, but nothing too serious for me to rip out my hair. (And my hairdresser says, that's a good thing! ;D )

Also, I love your characters, I especially like Sex. Erh, no pun intended. I'm glad that he's finally happy (FOR THE MOMENT)with Claudius (whom I also like), but there'll probably be further problems down the road. Meh. I'll enjoy it as long as it lasts.

And Skell just declared himself king of the assholes. But of course, he doesn't know any better. But still, I want to kick sand in HIS face. *Snort*. >3<
Oh well. Continue your absolutely wonderful stories! As long as you write, I'll read. :D

~Yaya