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person Cindyip
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally everyone is finally happy :P
person ayachan
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yessss.. revenge! haha, but I seriously would like a play by play of what happened in the BDSM fashion show.. it's just too funny to NOT write about. Anyway, I'm really liking where this story is going right now. Truthfully, I wasn't too happy with the beginning, even though I understand why you wrote it that way. I just wanted to see the brothers kick Orel Wessel's ass immediately, instead of being under their thumb for 7 years :( The time that they missed with their children killed me, but I'm glad that they took so long to be subdued- it just goes to show how strong they really are. Haha, please make Orel Wessels destruction as bloody and painful as possible- I'm sure those bastards deserve it. Anyway, 2 questions. Are you going to do anything with Britta, because it was her plan to split up the people in the first place that made the brothers fall into Orel Wessel's hands. And where did Orel Wessel come from? Was it an organization that took on that name? Or was the original head honcho named Orel Wessel and he created an organization that happened to be named after him?
person k
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG - What was this:

quote, 'I never want to have him feel that way ever again. No one deserves that kind of pain. I leaned forward and shoved Father to the bottom of the fountain. He began to fight me. An arm shot out of the water and tangled in my hair jerking me down toward the water. I transferred my hand to his throat and pushed all my weight on my arms.' unquote

A BDSM-fetish show. The brothers are going to earn the strangest reputation as Emperor. How are the children supposed to react, when somebody calls their daddy a bondage-Emperor? ... Too sad, it wasn't Azrael doing the show :-)

Is Claudius really thinking Azrael passing on a message to Skell will get through to the youngster? Claudius is nothing but a soul-pain-trigger to him and nothing at all a father. Before he tries to lecture Skell, he should work on developing a relationship with him.
Actually he should do that with all of his sons but with X backing him up, he can make it.

More please soon. Love it!
person Miharaz
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! That was the absolutely PERFECT way for Sex to show the return of the Lord Emperor =P lol i can just imagine drooling over those photos too =P
person Yaya
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the third time I read this chapter, and it still makes me laugh (and awww. And coo. And simply make a lot of adoring faces.). Especially Claudius' “Blingbling? What body part does that refer to?”, cracked me up. That guy needs to get out more. ;P
I don't know what, but there's something about your charcters that make them uniqe and kind of ALIVE. As if I could go around a corner and they would BE THERE. Their personalities, reactions, actions just feel so real. So great.

~Love, Yaya
person Dark Avenger
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A BDSM fashion show, lol, nice one. Anddd, I'm finally caught up. Hurray!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“I am NOT doing a BDSM fetish fashion show!”Nobody was listening. ROTFLMAO Still missing Armor!
Oh and I've been meaning to mention this, for some reason I can only picture Lanseng as Gunther from the anime Kyou Kara Maoh (here's a pic if you don't know who he is: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/ee/Gunter.jpg):P
person Spirit
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Frederick!! Always there when you need him =) hehe. Good on Lanseng to finally get his timing right too. I can't wait to read about the catwalk with lots of yummy descriptions pleeeeease!!! =).. (drools lol)

~Spiritxx
person Natana
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh hard weeek - Senseis that is Professors are trying to kill me.
Anyway, it is so good to find some time to read a good story and not only that - 3 chapters ! Good for me :D
After chap nr2 I hoped some Skell action, with Endellion and Him meeting for the first time and all. The war is coming and it is coming with style. ( Again with cheering for some good action scenes- that must be sugar, coffee and a roomate - no more homesicness :D)
I love how Marcus did some brainreading and found out about the things OW put Skell through. Brothers whould have never told their lovers about those days, and as Sex's/Sasha's example showed -things left unsaid are wounds untreated.
Anyway, so sorry for grammar. And a million watts worth of love for Clove and other Lord Emperor stories ;D
person Natana
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. After rereading my rewiev I must say - so sorry for not making sense.

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