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person Dark Avenger
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. ^^ Hurray for Skell having time out! *will eventually catch up... I hope.*
person Duelriel
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!
Skell seems very torn up about everything, the poor guy. I would almost call this chapter the 'Flashback Episode' cause I got reminded of SO MUCH STUFF. lol I love how Hades if forced to do the whipping. I never thought he was really punished enough for what he did to the brothers.
person Cindyip
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marcus can be a good brother when he needs to be:)
person Spirit
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I give you.... success!

Definitely an 'omg' moment when Skell is basically ordering Hades to whip Liam. Serves them both right, it's almost like killing two birds with one stone: Liam receives the corporeal punishment and Hades an emotional one. I can't figure whose side those two are on.. unless they're just on their own side? Hmmmmmmmm

Good luck with your new job, hopefully it won't interfere toooo much with the writing :)
And good luck with Cake's publication! Hope to hear good news on that soon.

~Spiritxx
person Miharaz
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh ... Skell has an evil side to him.... i love it! Lol i look forward to seeing what he'll do in the future. =)
person Laur
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELLZ YES SKELL!!!!

This is why he is hot!!!!
Damn that was evil and just plain shexy!!!

I heard a little KAnye in that. It was awesome chapter Kiix!

I hope you get published!
person fleur
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely last line,and lovely plot/character development in the last few chapters.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH! The Emperor is back in town!I think you nailed the OMG moment pretty well.
Still see Gunther every time Lanseng shows up; it's quite strange actually, because from your description they're very different.
Good luck with the publisher:]
person AsyenMari
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Umm... wow... The end of that chapter was unexpected to say the least. Not quite an OMG moment( I kind of expected the 2 birds one stone like they did to AZ and Marcus), perhaps that will lie within the next chapter when punishment is dished out by Hades--if he can do it that is, and if not what the consequences will be. Loved the emotional moment for Skell-- makes him closer to the brothers I think.
Look forward to the stone of punishment
Asyen
person Dark Avenger
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32...

Well... you certainly got the affect you were aiming for from me. I read the last paragraph, got all choked up, slapped my hand over my mouth, and murmured "holy..." under my breath. This should be... eventful.

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