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The Ancients they have their own way of doing things:)

LOL, way to go Skell! It would be interesting to see the other vampires' reaction. You know, Skell seems so logical that I just want him to pull a "Sex", lol, like make a super bad rash decision... just because it would seem so unlike him.

Hmm...the beginning of this one was really good, and the end was soo fluffy and cute--it was sick..I loved it!!! I was not aware *maybe not paying attention* that it was necessary to comfort Willliam as well as Liam seperately like the boys, perhaps you could throw in a chappie with Hades and little Willie- that would be cute.
Great job as usual
Asyen

Just caught up with your story after starting it 6 weeks ago. I cannot believe how attached I have become to the brother's development throughout your story so far. There are many parts that struck a chord with me, but the exchange between Skell and Hades... OMG! That DEFINATELY solidified the latest brother for me... Skell makes me tingle all over, oooh!

Considering the manner in which you write, it's rather interesting how your plots and storylines come together and you don't end up with weird loose ends. I'm creative in pretty much the same way, and almost always end up scared at the way my stories behave. I'm a control freak, so I haven't mastered the art of letting go... So, it's back to the practicing board for me.

Thanks again for your amaizing story, it has been a most serendipitous encounter.

Mini

Ch 33/169 - "Okay, the potatoes weren’t struggling that hard. Popcorn kernels are more energetic." You are too funny! Where do you come up w/ this stuff?

I love that Riot is now family! He's such a sweetie.

And ditto to everyone's comments on A&X's mushiness. Makes me melt! =)

Is that foreshadowing, the last line????? KIIIX DONT DO IT!!!!!

Loved the chapter.

Hi kiix! I've been reading your Lord Emperor Vampire series over the past week, and I love them. You definitely have a way with words and an amazing imagination. The first time I really cried (not just got teary eyed) with your stories was the chapter poor Sex tried to kill himself, and mainly because I could feel Sasha's pain without it even being vocalized yet. Wonderful job!

I remember reading one of your notes that said you are best at writing dialog. I think that might be part of the reason why I fell in love with your stories, because I love good dialog. Even your narratives are good dialog! I first found those two one-shots you wrote, and decided to search out more of your work.

I also remember you mentioning wanting to get a professional editor. While I'm nowhere near a professional, I'm good at it and I'd do it for free. You have a lot of grammatical errors and incorrect words... probably from 'Correct All' in Word, right? Sometimes I actually have trouble figuring out what word you mean, because the word is just so wrong. Anyway, I'd love to help and see you get published!

Keep up the good work!
Stephanie =)

Oh, I forgot to mention... this is from Caramel, but it still bothers me... When Sex was attacked at Edna's and all of the loyal were killed, but Riot was there and he wasn't killed... Where was he? He had already returned w/ Sasha's new clothes... Just a thought that keeps bugging me.

Oh, and in Cloves... it would have been funny if Sex had a blue band at the bottom of his white hair after the burn/healing after the fight w/ Claudius.

Thanks,
Stephanie =)

what can i say.... WOW!!!!
skell has balls!!!! and is cunning too....
but what skell said was true, hades and dish it out but cant deal with it....
hurting the one you love is cruel....

would liam and hades and the "brothers" and the rest of the van drachfield house still be on speaking terms after this?

i saw the pictures they are so great i don't know how i could miss them the first time!!!

ok there is onr thing i don't understand.

now Skell has Endellion, that sex had. so why did it come to sex and not directly to skell???

was skell insede sex, and Endellion made a mistake???

and now if a thnk a bit how come L. thought Azrael was H...!!!

could you please tell me!!!

sorry i took so long to review!!!this chapter is great i glad all i fine now.