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Just one word: I fucking hate OrelWessel to the core of my being... -__- When will you dispose of them...?????? Just make sure that OrelWessel will have a painful death...Castrate them or impale them like suckling pigs or cut their arms and legs and give them to the dogs to eat....I'm sure you'll have a brighter idea.. >__<

Oh Dear! The plot twists and thickens and gets even harder for the boys. Thank God for Armor!!!

HI~!! I've been reading through this for the last couple weeks. (and ignoring my work by the way) I think you're one of the greatest storytellers ever. I really have the urge to call X and the others 'the brothers grimm' since nothing seems to work for them, but then we'll probably get hit with lawsuits or something. I found the latest chapter really sad, orel wessel should go die in the grave it dug for itself. hehehe I pronounce orel wessel as Oral Weasel, like the animal, aren't weasels like rats. hnn I guess the name fits them. I don't want to wait to find out what X meant by 'I was so grateful to be home, but I couldn’t stay.' I have a feeling something bads gonna happen. (and in comes the piper, bringing with him a song of death)

Poor X and ArmorT_T

Oh Goddess.... I want to know what that trigger was!!!!
Oh and in regard to my previous review and the comment about SAXSk's eyes... I'd momentarily forgotten about the blue flame. :)
Keep the chappies coming!! And how's the second job going?

~Spiritxx

Oh no! So Xavier's going to leave? I know it's going to be all happy in the end (I mean... it has to, right?) but X would hurt everybody if he left. Not only his loved ones, but Sex, Skell and Azrael probably wouldn't be too pleased either. Man.... it'll be interesting to see what's what.

AAARGHH! How can anyone read like this! This is the first story I have followed from the beginning till now... OMG, I think I'm gonna die from waiting. I must say, that the anticipation kinda feels... ummm.. kinda good. I think. But let's wait and see if I'll feel the same 5 chapters down the line.

About the coupling (The term is used *broadly* here) of the brothers white; It seems that this time around they are more grounded and have it together. Before, I got the sense that they were 'claimed' and 'bonded' to their mates. It felt one-sided. Now they are actively laying claim to their partners (and their lives/identities). I think it might have something to do with the fact that they had five years spent in close proximity with each other, and they got to understand and accept a few things. Sex illustrated this point the best because of the way he is actively filling the role of protective big brother, (That minor suicide thing aside). They talk to each other better. They are a real bonified team! Growth is a wonderful thing, but it's not without it's 'gremlins'. Hee, he, he!

Amaizing story you've got here sweetie, may the juices never stop flowing. Don't worry, we'll still be here to slurp ... it..-
Eeeeeewwwwww! Bad imagery there. (It has potential though, *snigger*)

Mini

Chapter 170/34 "Danger"

Whoa Kiix!!

What's up with Xavier! I'm worried!!!
I've got a knot in my stomach that has nothin'
to do with the burrito I just ate!!

Really!!

Great dramatic Chapter.
(Thanks for killing off Princess Sarah!!)
She bothered me.
Very sad and wierd?! Kinda.

Thank god Armor is so strong and
could throw off a crazed Xavier!!

You've got me anxious!

Thanks,
R

Oh and thanks for that 2nd chapter to your
other story "That's What Brothers Do..."
really intensely great.

Thanks,
R

Damn X?

Shit he almost killed Armor. DamN!