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person Cindyip
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X finally reuited with his human familyT_T
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm Azrael makes an appearance. ^^ and i've always loved the 'master' & 'puppy' so yay! Anyways.. can you please clarify exactly WHY X attacked Armor? I still don't get it... is it just b/c Armor tied his wrist(? i think)? ><;; Anyways.. can't wait for next chappie! :D
person minz
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... the end was so cute! But I must say Xavier's mother rocks! There's something about that tone your mum uses that catches you in your gut, clenching it reflexively. I *know* you know what I mean, ha~haa~ha~~!

I don't know how to explain it but I have a bad feeling about these weird triggers. I don't think Marcus should do the whole mindwalk thing. He might turn around and do something stupid, or one of the pod might do something stupid (I recommend Claudius for 'the-most-likely-to-do-something-stupid-award').

What car models did Azrael buy for the girls? I'm thinking luxury German engineering, *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*.
person Rosei
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35 "Limo Interlude"

Loved all the warm feelings in this chapter
especially after the strife at the end of last
chapter!! OW will pay!!!

Thanks,
R
person Duelriel
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!
They're all happy, everything's fine (except for the fact that X is freaking) and life sounds like it might be good.
So who are you killing off in the next chapter? This is the DISTINCT aroma of being lulled into a false sense of security!
person Dark Avenger
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, not again! *wails*
person steph
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 170 - I was very confused with this chapter. It didn't seem to flow from the last, and everything just seemed so out of the blue. But maybe it's just that this is only the second chapter of this series that I've ever had to wait for. Not sure... This chapter was definitely a slap in the face from the happy-feel-good-ness of the previous chapter. =(

Steph
person k
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The angst! I love that development. Grow up, Xavier!

I wonder if Marcus could help the brothers with the triggers. He might be able to seek them out, if trusted enough to be let into the respective mind. It's strange, but I found it appeasing to see the Windfields gone. The two shot vampires - our little Emperor rules his court with an iron fist. If Armor keeps distracting X with Sex at times like this, pain and killing will become another trigger :-)

Love it!
person ayachan
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO DON'T MAKE XAVIER/SEX/AZRAEL/SKELL MOVE OUT!! not after he's.. they've? (lol, I have no idea how to refer to the brothers!) been gone for so long :( Damn, Orel Wessel is a pain in the ass. I hope the Vampire Nation gets them, and gets them good.

Chesterton snuggling up with Haruka.. awwww :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
person lone_child
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow~ what an awesome story! i was so hooked from the first book and just had to read the rest. you're an awesome writer. keep writing!