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hell yes! go go go! I'm glad that this chapter was updated so quickly ^^ Very exciting. Good luck on the next one!

Oh its getting closer to the end. Sadness!

oh my o/////////o Hades getting laid (finally :P). Anyways.. nice chappie like always and i'm glad that you feel a bit better and less stressful. i hope you don't mind me asking what made it so stressful... but anyways... i pull my hats off to you. Stressed and busy and /still/ writing wonderful stories! =huggles= you're so good.

Anyways.. just wondering. I know it's good that little Vad (heh) knows his place now and finally gets off of their back but i thought that if he does then the female Alphas will hurt the little winglets? hmm... or was there something i missed? Anyways... can't wait for the next chappie!

oh. my. god. Orel Wessel has the fucking balls to come looking for the brothers when they're with their family?!?!?!?!? not cool, orel wessel, not cool. Hope that one man gets the beating of his life. Oh, and clever way of punishing Raissa :) Haha, I would like to see the brothers mess with Daniel some more.. see if they can get him to loosen up a bit or something. Good chapter! Happy hunting on the next one ^^

Damn! Interrupting some darn good bonding time with the kids, stupid Orel Wessel. I love how Hades and Liam were screwing in the leaves... it's so juvenile yet fits so perfect. You made me giggle, GOOD JOB! O w O

Has OW a personell notch or are they just sending scouts? Whatsoever...

The Thomasina-referrence made me laugh. I can't anything about that film but for the scene of the girl crying out for Thomasina, which btw was a really scary cat. Will you dig a little more into Hades and William's life? It wasn't Liam - again, and I'm dying to know more about my most-loved C-character. I'm a total fool for the little shepherd.

Don't know what to make of the Raissa-incident. I have a feeling X shouldn't rely on Claudius for 'severe' punishment. It should be able to handle situations like this alone (or together with Claudia), though he probably can't after only knowing the winglets for a short period of time. But it's mean to let take Claudius on the role of the stern 'parent'. That way the kids will take both for a ride in the end.

BTW the g.-grandmother-appellation is so mean and coming from a flaming little peace of cake... Beat their ass, Hades (but not too much)! Make clear who is still stronger!

Go on!

Sorry to hear your life is hectic... it all happens to us, I've just gotten out of one of those periods, and strangely enough, your writing has helped keep me mostly sane. So big thanks to you, and a big hug, hoping your hectic stretch won't be too bad.

Question though... how do you pronounce Raissa's name?

Aah yes Sex needs to work on his smoothness.. I actually burst out loud laughing at the 'wood' funny.. wasn't quite expecting that. Sex sounds hyper right there.

I LOVED THE SCENE WITH THE PILE OF LEAVES AND THE INCOMING PUPPIES!!! AWESOME! but but but... aaah what, you darned person, what a cliffieeee!!! Damn OW to hell and back. aaah I want to know what goes on in the next chappie!! hurry up!! hehe..

~Spiritxx

Is it calming down now? Or was it the quiet before the storm? This book seems to be taking longer to develop; four brothers and respective consorts take longer to write and it reflects on the on the overall story. One good thing about it is that some chapters are character driven and others plot driven, maybe not good enough to publishing companies but brilliant for a reader.

Good to have you back, Kiix! Great chapter!

So it's ACTION TIME again! Orel Wessel doesn't know what expects them...
I like seeing them in the midst of family; its where they belong.
I want an uncle like the boys, who 'd give a mini cooper!!!;]