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OOh! This chappie vaporised the cockles of *my* heart. Sadly I could not bring myself to finnish the last part of this chapter! How sad is that? the moment I found myself on the part where they were about to make their way down to the ground, I stopped. *Bows head in shame* I totally suck at handling cliffhangers, and as usual, yours is masterfully executed.

I don't understand the bikkering between Hades and Sasha... What prompted that one? I understand why Claudius is keen to stay by Sex's side. Hades makes a good argument too, but what's his motivation? I'm thinking it might have something to do with his need for atonement for what he had done to the both of them. By placing himself in the line of fire on Sex's behalf, Hades might be taking steps in absolving his sence of guilt over his treatment of the two. Concidering the kind of person that Hades seems to be... guilt will be his companion for a long time, long after the people affected have moved on. *turns head with a sigh, shakes head slightly, and looks out the window, mulling over the view of an old man idly scratching his b@lls*

I think I can go back and finnish the chapter now.

Thank you ;)

Chapter 174 "On the Roof"

Your boys are soooooo handsome!!! The way
you describe them, EMO Claudius!!!

Wow!!! Lots of explaining going on and
it's really a great review of what happened so
long ago!!!

Great action packed chatper!!! So much happening,
are you sure there aren't 20 more chapters in the wings
or maybe CARDAMOM is next!!!! HA!!!

Thanks,
R

Chapter 137 "Circle"

Those OW people are SICK, SICK, SICK!!!!
Can't wait 'till the boys and company burn
them to the ground!!!!!!! (Oooh! I'm cranky!)

Thanks,
R

Oh wow..... more please!!! I'm sad that you now have the ending and the story will be drawing to a close.... I just love the boys soo much, I'm going to miss them even more!!!!
Great chapter, loved the last paragraph especially. I had a little trouble figuring out exactly which broter was where and when, but Azrael's name towards the end cleared things up a bit ;)
Eagerly waiting the next part,

~Spiritxx

Alright, now we will get some real answers:)

OMG...5 to 10 chapters left!!!!

Oh man Kiix!!!!!! I am waiting on pins and needles. This chapter was freaking awesome. I cant wait for the next one.

Sex in charge sounds like Xavier!
Payback is a bitch, neh?! Amazing chapter but is it true you'll be ending this in 5 to 10 chapters? NOOOOOOO!!! *regains composure*
So you already planning book 5?;P

omg. i love you so much. *huggles kiix*
thank you so much for another awesomeful chapter!! you just made my day <3

i just love that scene where they're just all sitting around waiting for orel wessel. ^_____^

ch. 38 - ooooh, yeaaahh... it's been a long time coming, OW! Get 'em, boys!

hey! so you've written the ending?!?! gimme, gimme, gimme! I'm not above reading the last chapter first! hehehe

as always, your dialog was excellent! be wary of the ambiguous pronouns, though. at several points in this chapter, I was confused as to who was talking to whom.

oh, btw, "thwartedness" is so not a word, but I loved it!!

Yeah, give that Oral Weasel a good pain...huo ho ho ho...
I never thought that Sasha will also look smoking hot in short hair...Yeah, the nape of long white neck is definitely sexier in shorter hair....Well, as long as it's not BALD or buzz-cut... -__-