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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GO GET THEM(OW)!!!!!!!!!!!CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thist is the besst chapter that was ever writen by anyone!!!!!!!
I am little confused could you please answer me some question??? DON'T GET MAD PLEASE!!!!
yeah that is my dream to find out the answer, but something tell me i will not get them.
i an just one of your hundreds of fans and I am just obe common face in a row of hundreds.
but i will ask them anyway. a part of me stii hopes, THAT WILL GET THE ANSWERS
so this is the problem:
in chapter 37, Kruger askes:
"Where are you, Edward?”
“In a place you tried to erase, that you tried to make me forget.”
and
"You were very brave surviving on your own these past four days, Edward. You’ve never been alone before. You haven’t killed any humans have you?”
but how can that be ???? he was on a BDSM fashion show! he was on Tv,with out tha mask ("Sasha ripped my mask off.") that was how his sister find out he is alive.
how come the ow don't know??? don't they have a tv????
and the other problem is in chapter 38:
Kruger again: “There’s two of you? Two blue line?”
i Book 3 we find out that, Alarik workes for OW, and that the elder B know about the killing of werewoves, but does nothing.
that means that OW and Northern pack have connections. and Bruce some how knows about Claudius blue blood.
how is possible for the Ow not to know about Claudius??? Didn't they knew that Claudius was the emperor???
AND ALSO WHEN A OW BASE WAS DISTROIED, THE VAMPIRES THAT WERE TESTED UPON WERE FREED WHAT HAPPEN TO THEM?AND THE PUP THAT HE SAVED FROM Alarik????
I am little confused could you please answer me some question??? DON'T GET MAD PLEASE!!!!
yeah that is my dream to find out the answer, but something tell me i will not get them.
i an just one of your hundreds of fans and I am just obe common face in a row of hundreds.
but i will ask them anyway. a part of me stii hopes, THAT WILL GET THE ANSWERS
so this is the problem:
in chapter 37, Kruger askes:
"Where are you, Edward?”
“In a place you tried to erase, that you tried to make me forget.”
and
"You were very brave surviving on your own these past four days, Edward. You’ve never been alone before. You haven’t killed any humans have you?”
but how can that be ???? he was on a BDSM fashion show! he was on Tv,with out tha mask ("Sasha ripped my mask off.") that was how his sister find out he is alive.
how come the ow don't know??? don't they have a tv????
and the other problem is in chapter 38:
Kruger again: “There’s two of you? Two blue line?”
i Book 3 we find out that, Alarik workes for OW, and that the elder B know about the killing of werewoves, but does nothing.
that means that OW and Northern pack have connections. and Bruce some how knows about Claudius blue blood.
how is possible for the Ow not to know about Claudius??? Didn't they knew that Claudius was the emperor???
AND ALSO WHEN A OW BASE WAS DISTROIED, THE VAMPIRES THAT WERE TESTED UPON WERE FREED WHAT HAPPEN TO THEM?AND THE PUP THAT HE SAVED FROM Alarik????
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they won? (^_^)
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39 "Salvation"
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Great action-packed chapter!!
Finally... OW gets it!!! (Andrews!!! Ouch!!!)
Oh yah, Skell needs a piano!! Hand of light!!!
Go baby!!! GO!!
Love the liver eating...nice touch!!
Thanks,
R
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Great action-packed chapter!!
Finally... OW gets it!!! (Andrews!!! Ouch!!!)
Oh yah, Skell needs a piano!! Hand of light!!!
Go baby!!! GO!!
Love the liver eating...nice touch!!
Thanks,
R
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAHHH I'm in awe. What a brilliant chapter!!!;] Tears came to my eyes
That was the weirdest place for Hades to have a 'relationship conversation'.
The piano moment was heart wrenching and that Andrews had to ruin it! tsk tsk he deserved everything done to him.
The liver eating thing was mostly gross but full of symbolism for the pack and brave, grown Haley.
And the whole bunch working as a team, beautiful!
That was the weirdest place for Hades to have a 'relationship conversation'.
The piano moment was heart wrenching and that Andrews had to ruin it! tsk tsk he deserved everything done to him.
The liver eating thing was mostly gross but full of symbolism for the pack and brave, grown Haley.
And the whole bunch working as a team, beautiful!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch. 39 - I thought Hades was his code name... who in their right mind would name their kid Hades? I think that should be his code name (Hades is the Greek god of the underworld, so it fits, no?), and we should vote on his human name. I don't remember where he was born, though.
hey! Han Solo did the cutting of the tauntaun, not Luke... "And I thought these things smelled bad, on the outside!"
hey! Han Solo did the cutting of the tauntaun, not Luke... "And I thought these things smelled bad, on the outside!"
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. i'm reading this at work and I want to SCREAM!!! I am so diggin this series. I was wondering though - I'm wondering if the plans of Thomas/O.W./Brittia may have started on different tracks and by some unknown force began to align together cause I see Skell doing some major damage and I can't wait to see the destruction. GREAT SERIES KIIX! You are the ultimate! Back to not working!...
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brillant yet again...Have the Brothers (X, Sex, Az, or Skell) met the head of Orel Wessel? Is the head of Orel Wessel human?
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing for a while...I have gotten caught up in playing Runescape again. That and working on a new plot for a story that I think will go over well. Anyway, I always thought that Hades was his Code Name...I've always seen Hades as a Vice. Kouman(Pride) or Gekido(Wrath), maybe both. Donno...It's your story, thus it is totally up to you. I'll try to review more offten, no promises though. :/ Ja!
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Due to circumstances beyond my control (otherwise known as lightning storms), this has been the longest forced sabbatical ever! All I have to say about it is that it has been absolute HELL without your story! So with a nifty little gadget made intirely of household items (it would even put McGuyver's attempt to shame)... I'm back.
I love the irony of how Xavier reprimanded (or is admonish better?) his daughter. Sex acted in the same manner not too many chapters before so he has a very intimate understanding of the far reaching effects his actions as Emperor has on all those around him, not just the ones in his immediate vicinity. That's deep, me likes that a lot.
Yay! The girls got the EXACT same car I wanna own simply because my name *is* Mini. Do you think one can buy a licence plate *before* they own the damn car? I have the name already picked out... I wanna make sure no one beats me to it. A little chat with the person in charge of licensing might prove fruitful. *evil gleam in eye* Hu, hu, hu...
I love the irony of how Xavier reprimanded (or is admonish better?) his daughter. Sex acted in the same manner not too many chapters before so he has a very intimate understanding of the far reaching effects his actions as Emperor has on all those around him, not just the ones in his immediate vicinity. That's deep, me likes that a lot.
Yay! The girls got the EXACT same car I wanna own simply because my name *is* Mini. Do you think one can buy a licence plate *before* they own the damn car? I have the name already picked out... I wanna make sure no one beats me to it. A little chat with the person in charge of licensing might prove fruitful. *evil gleam in eye* Hu, hu, hu...