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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a kick ass chappie tottally loooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddddddddddddd it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow i cant wwait 4 the next one
wow i cant wwait 4 the next one
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay - that was so freakin hot i don't know what to say first. i'm thinking thomas is behind these fledgling births. for some reason, i think he's got some hand in this particular brand of madness but i can't figure it out considering OW is behind it as well. who gave the initial orders for Claudius to be assasinated? that will be interesting to find out and that's the main motivation to where thomas would come in as a threat considering he killed sigmond - his control as council head is now threatened again and he knows he can't get close enough to kill claudious and X so he's got to come in under a fog. is brittia gonna get ran to ground as well? well there be an appearance of the eastern lycan again? wow - i've found a new soap opera to follow. great job kiix and can't wait for the next update! -L
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wOOt! Burn baby Burn! hehe loved this chapter (execpt the liver thingy...gross) Can't wait for the next one...though I have a feeling it's getting close to the end...ja!
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool!! love this chapter!! *looks evil* burn Orel Wessel burn. lol.
anyway...good job. i like the part what Claudius did to that one guy...forgot what his name was and i liked what Skell said.
anyway...good job. i like the part what Claudius did to that one guy...forgot what his name was and i liked what Skell said.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOOO!!!! Carnage and Annilation!
Awesome chapter!!!! Oh..I cant wait. I thought someone was going to die from the pack and I was getting very scared. Oh man. This chapter was so worth the wait. Rock on Kiix!
Awesome chapter!!!! Oh..I cant wait. I thought someone was going to die from the pack and I was getting very scared. Oh man. This chapter was so worth the wait. Rock on Kiix!
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaay another awesome chapter <3
thankies~
thankies~
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!
you updated “I was His” and made a new one “That’s what brothers do.”
I got to READ them, they won't excape ME unread.
I am a little sorry about the Princess, she was inocent , but is better this way. her life was already ruined the moment she decided to wait for Sex.
i am glad that A is so strong, i would hate to see something irreverseble happen to him
but that tell me that OW has more tricks to show. i wonder what the next trigger will be!!!!!
you updated “I was His” and made a new one “That’s what brothers do.”
I got to READ them, they won't excape ME unread.
I am a little sorry about the Princess, she was inocent , but is better this way. her life was already ruined the moment she decided to wait for Sex.
i am glad that A is so strong, i would hate to see something irreverseble happen to him
but that tell me that OW has more tricks to show. i wonder what the next trigger will be!!!!!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think is nessery, but i don't think X will accepet A offer because of 2 things.
he is affread of: 1. what happen last time,
and 2. what will A find and waht he will see, no?
that last scene is soo great, they are finily together!!!!!!!
he is affread of: 1. what happen last time,
and 2. what will A find and waht he will see, no?
that last scene is soo great, they are finily together!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters with Hades; you made me happy after a rough week!
The names:
Raissa (Ra-e-ssa) but who cares. She is your character and if you want her to be called Ray-is-sah, Ray-is-sah it is.
A code-name for Hades ... Hades itself is fitting but since the lovely little shepherd made Hades his name instead of Cillian he could use another one. The first name, that came to my mind was Babka but I doubt Hades would appreciate it but the OWs and/or the police searching for an elderly woman instead of the blonde teenager could be funny.
Giving it a serious consideration I can only think of Kratos (since you already used Thanatos). The Kratos of the Greek Mythology was personified strength and power. He accompanied his Lord (Zeus) and fullfilled all of his orders (like administering divine punishment) without ever questioning him while totally identifying with him (sort of like I figure Hades did when he used to be Liam's Cillian). Friendship etc. were basically strangers to Kratos because of this identification with his Lord. Eventually Kratos overpowered the god of war to gain more power and status. Enough of the Myth-lesson - I vote for Kratos.
I disagree about the matter not being a hunter-matter. OW kills and transformes humans into vampires. If that wasn't a hunter-matter, I don't know.
Claudius showing his wings is careless. The party might not be able to sense other OWs but since the brothers and Claudius are able to disappear of the radar themselves they should consider OW might have some more tricks in store. I still don't know who is giving them information. It could be Lenore, she wouldn't know about Claudius blue heritage and have an interest in shunting the blue line.
What about the Northern Lycans? They were good enough to instantly retrieve information about Claudius being a royal blue and now they are all silent and waiting? I need more chapters. I love this story.
Thank you for sharing!
The names:
Raissa (Ra-e-ssa) but who cares. She is your character and if you want her to be called Ray-is-sah, Ray-is-sah it is.
A code-name for Hades ... Hades itself is fitting but since the lovely little shepherd made Hades his name instead of Cillian he could use another one. The first name, that came to my mind was Babka but I doubt Hades would appreciate it but the OWs and/or the police searching for an elderly woman instead of the blonde teenager could be funny.
Giving it a serious consideration I can only think of Kratos (since you already used Thanatos). The Kratos of the Greek Mythology was personified strength and power. He accompanied his Lord (Zeus) and fullfilled all of his orders (like administering divine punishment) without ever questioning him while totally identifying with him (sort of like I figure Hades did when he used to be Liam's Cillian). Friendship etc. were basically strangers to Kratos because of this identification with his Lord. Eventually Kratos overpowered the god of war to gain more power and status. Enough of the Myth-lesson - I vote for Kratos.
I disagree about the matter not being a hunter-matter. OW kills and transformes humans into vampires. If that wasn't a hunter-matter, I don't know.
Claudius showing his wings is careless. The party might not be able to sense other OWs but since the brothers and Claudius are able to disappear of the radar themselves they should consider OW might have some more tricks in store. I still don't know who is giving them information. It could be Lenore, she wouldn't know about Claudius blue heritage and have an interest in shunting the blue line.
What about the Northern Lycans? They were good enough to instantly retrieve information about Claudius being a royal blue and now they are all silent and waiting? I need more chapters. I love this story.
Thank you for sharing!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is not fair!!!!!i want to be Nightshade, and watch the channal, horny shepherd and his lamby alias - Mary had a little horny lamd....and i wouldn't mined to also see the other programs, especially it about winged men!!!!!!!!!
BUT I CAN ONLY DREAM!!!!!!!
how the hell, did ow find him, there????
BUT I CAN ONLY DREAM!!!!!!!
how the hell, did ow find him, there????