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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch. 41 - *sigh* X really is a dink. nice cliffhanger, grrrrr!
oh, about the confusion... I'm still a bit confused... have we been introduced to Carmilla Danvenport and Elizabeth Kench before? the names sound so familiar! Thomas was the vamp who showed up at that garden party where Reggie was killed, rt?
oh, about the confusion... I'm still a bit confused... have we been introduced to Carmilla Danvenport and Elizabeth Kench before? the names sound so familiar! Thomas was the vamp who showed up at that garden party where Reggie was killed, rt?
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, does this mean Marcus/Armor are going getingg screwed?^_^;;
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg.
omg.
omgomgomg. thank you soo much for another awesome chapter, but... you... you... cliffhanger-writer!! you're so evil!! why did you stop there?! *wails*
i is anxiously waiting for the next chapter. please make it soon!! >________<
omg.
omgomgomg. thank you soo much for another awesome chapter, but... you... you... cliffhanger-writer!! you're so evil!! why did you stop there?! *wails*
i is anxiously waiting for the next chapter. please make it soon!! >________<
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAHH I'M BACK!!!! AsYeN in da house woot!!!
*ahem* Kay I'm better now....
Whoa kixx, nice job on these last 4 chapters! My computer was on the fritz for over a month, *sigh* and it sucked!!! So sorry I was unable to review in so long, I didn't abandon you I promise!!!
I love the way this story is progressing, and what's this? A definate on a 5th book? Yeah buddy!!! Hmm.. more Lycan involvement and loose ends, definately. I would like a bit more insight into the early life of little Vlad and the Females as well as um.. what happened to Haley's grandbitch? Did I miss something?!?
Thank you thank you for not abandoning this fic when you were having difficulties in your life, some times this story was all I had to look forward to. I read the other stories you've posted and those are pretty tasty as well, but I must say this series is my upmost favorite!!! Do continue, pretty please
Asyen
*ahem* Kay I'm better now....
Whoa kixx, nice job on these last 4 chapters! My computer was on the fritz for over a month, *sigh* and it sucked!!! So sorry I was unable to review in so long, I didn't abandon you I promise!!!
I love the way this story is progressing, and what's this? A definate on a 5th book? Yeah buddy!!! Hmm.. more Lycan involvement and loose ends, definately. I would like a bit more insight into the early life of little Vlad and the Females as well as um.. what happened to Haley's grandbitch? Did I miss something?!?
Thank you thank you for not abandoning this fic when you were having difficulties in your life, some times this story was all I had to look forward to. I read the other stories you've posted and those are pretty tasty as well, but I must say this series is my upmost favorite!!! Do continue, pretty please
Asyen
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was soooo not a good thing. I mean i know that he's the Lord Emperor or anything but i still think this is going to go really badly for Marcus and thus Armor, with maybe even the brothers or armor being exposed to the world. Man Xavier really didn't think that one through >.<
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! ><
*twitch*
You simply must write more!!!
*whimper* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? ;-;
*twitch*
You simply must write more!!!
*whimper* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? ;-;
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh the sweet love making between Sex and his Sasha, beautiful:] And I love seeing Xavier getting down to business but wouldn't that be big BIG trouble for Armor?
Yay on Book 5 (only saw it now) *does the happy dance across the room*
Although I do not know how you intend on finishing this one, but the line "Time would tell if he would finally destroy me completely." has me thinking about the future, here's what I think could happen:
-The boys wipe out the ow weeds and rotten apples within the Nation, create a new empire to rule as they see fit;
Skipping to book 5,
-You solve the Lycan problem (am I extrapolating too much when thinking Haley will lead the pack?)
-A few good years go by, like 100 (they're vampires, they need long lives) or have the brothers become ancient (wouldn't that be nice); it solves your problems with the kids, for one;p
-You could work the long lasting effects of ow in them, really long term
-Get them new troubles with the lovers (again Sex's line about Claudius comes to mind) and would be lovers, who knows, a new brother o_o
-And some new super powered up vampires or a new threat and you'll be rolling into book 6>.<
Maybe you just have it all planned out but who knows if this ramblings wont be useful in a rainy day.
Yay on Book 5 (only saw it now) *does the happy dance across the room*
Although I do not know how you intend on finishing this one, but the line "Time would tell if he would finally destroy me completely." has me thinking about the future, here's what I think could happen:
-The boys wipe out the ow weeds and rotten apples within the Nation, create a new empire to rule as they see fit;
Skipping to book 5,
-You solve the Lycan problem (am I extrapolating too much when thinking Haley will lead the pack?)
-A few good years go by, like 100 (they're vampires, they need long lives) or have the brothers become ancient (wouldn't that be nice); it solves your problems with the kids, for one;p
-You could work the long lasting effects of ow in them, really long term
-Get them new troubles with the lovers (again Sex's line about Claudius comes to mind) and would be lovers, who knows, a new brother o_o
-And some new super powered up vampires or a new threat and you'll be rolling into book 6>.<
Maybe you just have it all planned out but who knows if this ramblings wont be useful in a rainy day.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgz.. =throw hearts everywhere= green tea pocky is my absolute favorite flavor! GREEN TEA!!!!!! =drools= have you tried real green tea ice cream? Not those imitations? it's like green tea pocky x 1000! i'm serious! SO GOOD!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BOOK 5 YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HELLA EXCITED!!!!
HELLA EXCITED!!!!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Holy Sasha~! Nice chapter by the way. ANYWAYS! I'm a bit confused about the whole... thing. >__> like
"I walked right up and touched his forehead. Let the screaming begin. “He” was Thomas the Elder. Thomas the betrayer. Thomas who regicided my great grandfather fruitcake, nut job. However, Thomas wasn’t ‘in’ on the gig. Thomas held the history of the Houses. He knew the lineage. Thomas was being duped by…Carmilla Danvenport and Elizabeth Kench. Ok, Skell killed Kench’s uncouth kid. But she was doing this long before that happened. Davenport sat on Council. Now that that bitch of the grandmother was dead, Danvenport was Thomas’ right hand woman.
Ooooh, I had a headache. Orel Wessel came to Johnny here and told them that they wanted a specific house or family. Danvenport was the queenpin and Kench was the girl Friday. If a suitable candidate could be found quickly, they did it themselves. If they needed a particular house, they tracked the younger Vampires. Depending on the Orel Wessel order, the newest fledgling made was ‘taken’."
THAT! I read then re-read and RE-re-read these two paragraphs more than THREE times and i /still/ don't get it. Only pieces while the others are just confusing the heck out of me. Hopefully, an explanation please? Sorry and thanks.
So other than that little bit, i can't wait for some Sasha and sex loving! WOOOOT!! Make it hotty hot hot!
"I walked right up and touched his forehead. Let the screaming begin. “He” was Thomas the Elder. Thomas the betrayer. Thomas who regicided my great grandfather fruitcake, nut job. However, Thomas wasn’t ‘in’ on the gig. Thomas held the history of the Houses. He knew the lineage. Thomas was being duped by…Carmilla Danvenport and Elizabeth Kench. Ok, Skell killed Kench’s uncouth kid. But she was doing this long before that happened. Davenport sat on Council. Now that that bitch of the grandmother was dead, Danvenport was Thomas’ right hand woman.
Ooooh, I had a headache. Orel Wessel came to Johnny here and told them that they wanted a specific house or family. Danvenport was the queenpin and Kench was the girl Friday. If a suitable candidate could be found quickly, they did it themselves. If they needed a particular house, they tracked the younger Vampires. Depending on the Orel Wessel order, the newest fledgling made was ‘taken’."
THAT! I read then re-read and RE-re-read these two paragraphs more than THREE times and i /still/ don't get it. Only pieces while the others are just confusing the heck out of me. Hopefully, an explanation please? Sorry and thanks.
So other than that little bit, i can't wait for some Sasha and sex loving! WOOOOT!! Make it hotty hot hot!