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schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that was cool. i thought he would tell the secret. like that but i didn't think he will actualy do it.but please PLEASE Sex is the dominat one please give more details!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!

this chapter is great please update soon!!!!
person violetstorm713
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I enjoy reading your work. This is sometimes the highlight of my day.!
person lavcea
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh kiix - you just can't stick with the current matters at hand can you? you have some sick muse that likes to add more fuel to the already out of control bonfire. what are we to do with you besides continue to read and get sucked further into this dark/sexy world you have created. i'm loving the intro of the hunter society. i'm so waiting impatiently for the revelation of what will actually happen regarding X and Marcus and the fact that he was created w/out the covenant. this is an interesting twist you thrown in here my dear kiix. i'm not even going to ask/demand/throw a tantrum for the outcome of thomas, the fledglings, and the utter stupidity of the other crazy vamps running around town. I'm just going to sit back, w/my cup of hot cocoa and wait for you to spoon feed us the end results when you get good and damn ready. great update and can't wait for the rest of clove and the into to the 5th book.
person k
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X and his big mouth ...

I wonder if you aren't going off on too many targets rights now and if you will be able to tie everything back together. The boys are barely able to deal with the problems they have and keep adding more and more on their shoulders. Breaking the covenant as the most sacred-law of the vampire-nation could have killed Xavier anyway but now he put even his children in the line of fire! How could he do that? Many elder vampires will regard his line as defiled and illegitimate. He just fed the council another reason to remove him and his line from the gene pool. Giving the enemy an advantage like this against the whole house of V.D. is beyond excuse. What does poor Claudius have to do to drive a fact home with his boys? If I was Claudius, I ordered the immediate elimination of the regency and every single soul present that was unfortunate enough to hear X's statement. X may not be allowed to be his children's father first but he ought to at least think about them before pulling something stupid!

A chapter well done! Finally you get the show on the road.
person Rosei
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 177 "Friends of a Feather"

Oh my god!!!
He let the cat out the bag!!!!
He's gonna be in deep doo-doo now!!!(?)

Great Sex/Claudius packed chapter!!!
Glad Lanseng got the refreshing hug/nappy!!!
I like that guy!!!

Thanks,
R
person violetstorm713
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great, Your writing is absolutely beautiful. But I'm starting to really miss Xavier. It seems like a long time since any of the brothers have been out, other than Sex and on occassion Az.
person Duelriel
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O
All smiles and sex and happy happy time... then dammit X has to open his big dumb mouth. I wonder how the Regency council will take it... but then again it's not really under their jurisdiction to carry out punishment, is it?
person laur
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Xavier!

Oh whats going to happen!!???? DAMN Cliffhangers!!!!
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot! Nice long chappie! =dances= anyways... lol right after i read the last sentence "'Silence filled the chamber. Not another good thing, I take it. Damn.' the thought that immediately ran through my head was 'well Xavier can always just say "Just kidding!" :P Heh.. anyways... can't wait for the next chapter (like always); same for your other lovely stories.
person Spirit
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 177: Friends of a Feather

Amazing sweet fluffy beginning... And then wham. Xavier's all wrong-footed at the Regency Council. I admire him for aligning himself by the Coven Fledglings, but that is taking it a little too far. Although, I do understand his thinking that if he shows to the Council that he is the same as the others who came begging, then maybe they will understand. However, I would've thought it obvious that they wouldn't, seeing as they're so skeptical about everything else.

Still though, shouldn't the Lady Regent be present for all matters concerning the Regency? That would've seemed obvious to me.....

I want to know now, exactly how the Regency Council reacts to Xavier's declaration.. post the silence shock.

Wonderful work!! :)

~Spiritxx