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person Dark Avenger
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Less OW for everyone, good. And less tracking devices, even better. Anddd, I'm caught up again!
person ayachan
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, all caught up! Wow, I LOVED this chapter. It was AMAZING. The fight was just awesome! Too bad this isn't a movie or anything because the visuals in my head are just too cool to be true. Lol, wow, I had forgotten about Bruce- truthfully, I thought he died at the end of the 3rd book because he made Sex run away and get captured by Orel Wessel. Anyway, couple of questions... when do Lycans usually come of age? I thought it was around 60.. but the first time you meet Haley, he's 40.. so add on 10 years, and he's only around 50-ish! And how do naturally born vampires age (I know, completely random)? Do they actually grow old and stuff or does their body just stop aging at a certain point and they stay at that "age-level" until they are killed? And what's up with Chesterton? I miss that guy :) Anyway, yay for Lanny-loving the next chapter ^^ He deserves it! Good luck and congrats about Yaoi House!!!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh kiix, you've got me waiting on pins and needles...i can't wait for th next chapter. you are awesome. and congrads about the publishing! i can't wait to see you books and by them and re-read them!
person Duelriel
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, I think I almost had a heart attack when Orel Wessel got him again! And why does Britta always have shitty timing? Congratulations, it's an excellent chapter! You have thoroughly distracted me from the paper I'm supposed to be writing.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O!!! Nice! I really liked this chapter, I did. I thought for a moment that they were going to get him again, but then I remembered that they would have to go through the Lycan, Hellcats, and the House Members. Hahaha! Can't wait for your next update. :)
person Berlin
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! You just about gave me a heart attack! I seriously thought Skell was going to be captured by Orel Wessel again. Thank god for Hayley (although he really didn't do much to free Skell, did he?) and Claudius for showing up when they did.
So does this mean that Britta and Orel Wessel is working together??
person lavcea
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. so if i understand this chapter correctly Britta is also working w/OW? I find it mighty convenient that everytime OW is around so is Bruce. There are some things that need to be explained. Come one end of book for and book 5. This is getting mighty deep and I can't wait for the next installment.

Also, congrats on the good vibe you're getting from Yaoi House LLC. That's awesome that you dreams are coming true. You have a fan.

P.S.: Where's my bluberry lovin???
person Laur
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome Chapter!!!

Man I loved it.

Britta is going to be upset when she finds out about Haley.
So Orel Wessel is done?
person lone_child
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uaaahhhh!!! thankies for another awesome chapter!!!
luffs~
person Spirit
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omigosh congratulations!!! Wheee I'm so excited for you!! For sure when they come out, I'm going to buy them and read them all over again :) *does a happy dance with Kiix*


Oh wow... intense chapter!! Great though. I love Shade's quirky remarks too. She must be my absolute favorite character. All the others I've liked and disliked at some point, but Shade has always been a favorite <3 I wanna Hellcat like her!!

Oh my gosh... I cried out loud when Skell got shot, that's just not fair! And Haley and Bruce.. and what is this about Britta suddenly needing to know that Haley's an adult now?! I mean, she cast him out. Hmm something fishy is going on right there, and I wanna know what it is!

I can't wait for the next chapter! You've made it sound like Skell is in the process of dying, so I need the next one to prove to me that he's still of this world. If he's not I'm going to majorly cry. You can't kill him! He's THE story! Even though it's called 'Clove' and that's Claudius's essence.

~Spiritxx