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schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clever little girl, huh?
Lovely loving scene with Skell and Lanseng, as always.
person ayachan
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Lanseng is just getting more and more nicknames!! I like muffin though :P It's just too cute!
person Cindyip
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
From the mouth of babes, Raissa is just so cute!^_^
person Blaze
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww. first some blueberry lovin, then Raissa shows how smart she is! overall, a very good and sweet chapter!
person k
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!!

Honeybee certainly knows how to build a fortress. That talk with Armor ... sounds like Skell toys with the idea of bottoming for Lanseng. Is there a baby-Hellkit on the way for Skell? I so liked Bruce but meanwhile I think I'd cheer if Haley ever gets the chance to rip in in two. I'm suprised X didn't shot Skell an energy-blast of healing light. The Wessels are like a plague of roaches - you trample one down and it just lays eggs. I bet the boys will have their hands full for centuries until the world is cleaned from OW. Maybe they can stop by in Japan again. Wouldn't Kiyoshi be happy to see his grandchildren once in a while?

This chapter totally rocked!
person JaceQuin
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya. Last week when you were all... jobless and computerless again and everything I wished I had money so that I could have given you a computer. You're far too amazing not to be able to have an outlet for your talent. But I'm glad Cake might/will get published and that you're getting a new computer. Hopefullly the laws of Karma don't forget to make up their debt completely and get you a new job... and some fricking tupperware and whatever else the thieves stole. *loads of hugs and encouragement* I apologize for not reviewing every chapter. I've been reading the series since the very first chapter of Cake and I always love your writing even if I don't always remember to review.
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"“I am a Coven Fledgling.”

“NO!” Claudius took a step forward. “Xavier!”

“I was made without the Covenant.”

Silence filled the chamber. Not another good thing, I take it. Damn."

*hisses* oh, this should go over like... a lead brick.
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Icing everywhere! Hmm, drunk from cake, what a grand idea!
person Rosei
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 44 "Cull of the Wessel"

Excellent!!!
Anytime the weasels get creamed I LOVE IT!!!
Very exciting chapter!! Thanks for bringing
back that bad boy Bruce!! Glad he gave Haley his props!!!

Loved every little moment in this chapter!!!

Congrats on your YAOI HOUSE exposure!! If they publish
any of your stuff, I'll be there!! (Just have to look for
the website.)

Best of luck to you and yours!!!
Thanks,
R
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You just like cliffhangers, don't you? Evil! lol

... and dance they shall.