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person jenni-any
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just had to go AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! at Rassia's question! So bittersweet :(
person Gwengwel
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am in the middle of reading your book(s), I'm not going to comment but wait at the end of book 5.
(Well you can see, since I am at the end of book 4, that I like loll)

It's already 2 years since you finish this book so I don't know if you read the review here loll.

However, I constat some thing. Nothing big.
In the chapter 40, when they talk about found Kevin maker, they name her Emily Gregory, but when Kevin name his maker in the chapter 4, her name was Gina.

Gwengwel.
P.s. English's not my mother tongue, I hope that I didn't make too much fault.

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okk... First of all... I've been reading your books for a while now and I'm enjoying it... But I have some questions:
1. Why did Armor fall for X if it was Sex who stabbed him? Love at first sight or what?
2. How come Orel Wessel didn't know X was emperor when he was captured? Who did they think he was and why were they following him around if they didn't know?
I'll think of more questions :D. For now, carry on with your work and good luck on your publishing...
Scarlet Hyacinth
person twilight
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why would his grandmother need to know if she tried to kill him??
person twilight
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how i love the drama
person Akemi
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...

I've almost caught up with you now!

Unfortunately the piano song I mentioned in a previous review will have to be on hold as I am sick as a dog with the flu. And maybe bronchitis.

I can't wait to start the next book. As such, I'm ending my review here--
person AkemiY
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're forgiven for what happened at the end of Caramel...for now. I feel strange reviewing something in the middle that is complete with a sequel...
person Akemi
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason this story is getting a huge emotional reaction from me... As a musician in general and a pianist in particular, nearly anything to do with the crimson grand has left me in tears. And Marcus...losing his music... Okay, I'm not going to cry anymore. Probably.

I wrote a song that brings me in mind of this story, especially the relationship between Claudius and Sex. I'll see if I can review a link to it soon...
person Ana
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally finished this story, and I LOVED IT! Absolutely amazing. I love the way you weave everything together. It is an amazingly complex plot, but you handle it masterfully.

Question: Xavier (or whoever went crazy at the warehouse) tasted Haley's blood right? So what's Haley's essence?

person Dark Avenger
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending to a lovely book. Great job, as always. ♥