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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it;s a good story so far, need SOMETHING to fill the void while waiting till aug... will you update?
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww come on. update PLEASE!? i like romantic vampire stories, and yours is very well done.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i really like this story.
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An advice that will improve your story: less dialogue and more description please. If you`re writing a story, I doubt that you`ll need almost all of your chapters written in dialogue. It`s less desirable to read, well... in my opinion (which is biased) since it comes from me... I hope you take this to heart and work on this conflict.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story. Sounds a bit mashed together at times, but still pretty good. Keep working on it and you'll get a lot better.