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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok just to let you know i love everything you have written to date sooo ill be back for more and more...please keep updating :D
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Get rid of that writer's block! This has a great start, please update soon
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful writing style! I love it ^^ I hope you will update soon. I am quite eager to find out what is going to happen next. Your dragon-man is a fantasy lover, indeed! Mmm, Naomi and the Dragon. It's probably going to be a very interesting ride. Can't wait ^^ Keep up the good work. Your adoring fans will be waiting patiently for the next installment.
Best Wishes,
R.R.
Best Wishes,
R.R.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far and I can't wait for more. I'm also reading your story "War."
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo good! I'm hooked! =)
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I am particularly interested in War. So I thought I'd read some of your other stories as well. I read some stories that sound similar to this one. i.e. The girl who has to steal... blah blah blah.
I do like the start, you're a great writer. But Naomi sounds too brave, and too amazing. I don't know anyone who could take on several guys and live to throw them into the shark-infested-ocean. Which isn't saying much, because I don't know anyone who's ever had to steal either.
The point is, right now, Naomi doesn't have a weakness. It's hard to imagine her to be real because she is too perfect. I hope in the future you will portray her as a vulnerable. Not only sexually as the story will turn, but emotionally as well.
I do like the start, you're a great writer. But Naomi sounds too brave, and too amazing. I don't know anyone who could take on several guys and live to throw them into the shark-infested-ocean. Which isn't saying much, because I don't know anyone who's ever had to steal either.
The point is, right now, Naomi doesn't have a weakness. It's hard to imagine her to be real because she is too perfect. I hope in the future you will portray her as a vulnerable. Not only sexually as the story will turn, but emotionally as well.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really ike your plot. I can tell you really put some time into it and it definitly shows with the absolutly amazing chapters you have so far. You must have a really good beta because i didn't see any spelling mistakes. I hope you update soon can't wait to read what happenes next. Keep up the good work.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh i like this story! it was just starting to get good. please update this story soon, i want to know what happens to naomi and this dragon dude. update soon. Ja-Ne =^_^=
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude very realistic. i cant wait for more.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what was that about. The fighting off the men on the shore I get. But the man with wings and fangs - what? She needed to be quiet for a dragon - did I get that right?
I really don't want to wait for the next chapter, but seeming it's for War - I'll stay strong. However, I do want this story to continue. Please...PLEASE... continue this story, I really want to know what the hell is going on this island.
I really don't want to wait for the next chapter, but seeming it's for War - I'll stay strong. However, I do want this story to continue. Please...PLEASE... continue this story, I really want to know what the hell is going on this island.