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for You Pierce Me

by shevien

person RJaneyP
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start...please keep going!
person Aleks
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For a newbie your writing is very good.....interesting start!!!
person Chrysler
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good descriptions. I like it a lot.
person fiby
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really AWSM! I really fealt bad for him. bulling is no fun! and who is the new guy? oooOOOoOoOoOooo I can't wait for an update.Love!
person Saminada
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!! I hope that man isn't some sick little bastard or something!
'cause if that's so, that boy sure don't have any luck! >>

I really can't wait to see what you have in store for the boy!
Plz update soon!