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for You Pierce Me

by shevien

person Poppyhigh
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope to read more...But I think it's a bit long to say that 555 ^^. Just hope!!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's absolutely gorgeous, darling! Wonderful. Keep going ...
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, please update soon.
person shavin
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must...have...more!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!!!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh I am interested! Please continue!
person Saminada
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man! This chapter got me totally hocked!! I just loved it!!! ^^

Now I wonder who that man really is? And what's he gonna do next?

I really can't wait to read more of this! I just love it! Ur such an awesome writer!!!!

Anyways, I hope u update again soon! 'cause I want mooooooore!!!! lol ^^

Thanks for the story! *hugs*
person aisha
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More!!! I totally have to know what is going to happen.
person Ren
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that's so sweet.

Is he gonna take him home and tend to the poor beat up little pup? The whole bath, bed, tender touch deal?

Don't suppose you're gonna update this anytime soon. Hope you haven't just stopped on it as it's such a good set up.


schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing what comes next. This is very well written for a newbie, however, you could use the services of a beta. Now having said that, I offer my services to you. If you so choose, drop me an email. Although I have not beta'd for many people, part of my job is editing. Looking forward to more!!

You accepted!!! *does Snoopy dance** Okay! I am off to work!!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. 2 things.

1: Wonderful story. Seriously. I like it, and hope you plan to update.

2: I have something I'd like to say (not angry) in reference to the comment you left on my story, (or lack-thereof) but... If you have like a spare email or something, I'd appreciate it. If not, ^^.