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Chapters 1 & 2

Good beginning to an interesting story!!
Wow! Pretty powerful scene in chapter two!!
Would love to know more about Micah, Jack and Aidan,
seems like there is a lot here to tell.

Thanks,
R

Please continue! I just found this today, and I really like it! I hope you feel up to writing more some day.

So, I saw the review you left (thanks! by the way) and your screen name seemed familiar, so I clicked and then I saw this story and I remembered reading it and was surprised that I hadn't reviewed, because I really like it! So...if you wanted to write more on it...I would definitely read it. Yeah.

I'm curious as to why this only has one review. It's much better than a lot of the stuff on this site, even if the writing leans toward purple prose at times. But I only really noticed it in the beginning before it faded into something smoother.

I haven't read all that you've posted so far, but I like what I have. The dialog is interesting and realistic, the characters are great and I definitely want to see more. ^__^ Keep up the good work, eh? Don't know why you haven't had much response. It's a shame!

wow, a good start, it's very interesting. hope to see more soon (-: