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olease finish the story

omg this is soooo good!!! I can't wait until this story Is finished. So this is were the lovely writer continue the story for her darling fans.

omg u have to write more!!!! I know u have a life beyond writing but I'm begging u plz write at least another chapter. You can leave us hanging like this!!!! Much love!

wow this story is soooo fucking kewl! You have to write more it's really good

Great idea and executed well. I'm hoping you'll write more so I can find out what comes next.

Great Story! I jstu sat here and read the whole thing in one sitting! I don't hink I would trust Angel either!! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

Love this fic!!! I just read it for the first time and could not stop until I finished. This reminds me alot of the Black Dagger Brotherhood series by J.R. Ward only it doesn't have the bits that always annoyed me about the series: the lame "gangsta" dialogue between the brothers (like centuries old creatures talk like that? Ha) , focus on the antagonists (don't care what the lessers/changelings are doing), and brand name dropping (do I care if he's wearing Armani? That they drive an Escalade?). Please keep writing, because I especially want to know Zackery/Pearl's story (saw that forshadowing)! You're an excellent writer, you capture the world brilliantly. Only one thing: singular female is spelled "woman", multiple is "women". And when using an expression meaning that someone doesn't say anything, use "sighed" or "muttered" instead of "humped" because that means something completely different. The first few times I read that, I though something totally different (whoa) until I realized it was a misspell. That's it though, keep going!

hey me again. Dude were the hell are you.

like I said before, I love this story, so please don't let it go unfinished like so many others I've seen.

I'm sorry if this makes you feel rushed but I would really like to see were this is going & I'm sure many others would too.

I just want you to know you do have fans out here so please don't abandon this.

about time they did it, all of that sexual tension was getting to be too much lol.

You really do have alot of talent, I love this story.
the only problem I see is it needs some proof reading here & there.
other than that I LOVE it.
please add more soon