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for Paint Me a Picture

by Devilofdarkness

person smint45
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story!!! Too bad you probably won't update it after 2 years!!! I really liked it, and would have loved to see more of it!!!Thank you for this wonderfull smutt!!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think I love this. I thought Moonlight Denial was great, but this is just somehow amazing even in comparison. Maybe it's the pull of the story behind the picture that got me. I'm a sucker for stuff like that. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more of this (and everything else.)
person navajo
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this was soo soo oh so hot XD i really hope you continue this story
person audri
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update.
person aisha
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! SWEET JESUS! THIS STORY IS GREAT! KEEP IT COMIN' HON!
person dutsada
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess you don't have to worry about switching from Paranormal to Slash after all.. I think you did absolutely great! Love the smutt.. i think its the best on i have read! can't wait for the next chapt!
person maeski
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fucking hell!
why cant all writers on here write like you!
:]
i loved it. you, dear, are my new favorite author.
person kikib77
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! looking forward to the next update!
person JV2
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so " D:> *GASP* NOOO! " when I realized that wasn't actually a second chapter, but now I think its kinda good because I can review the first chapter! (I always feel too odd to review past chapters, even if I really like it...) Anyways, here's what I would have said:

EEEK! Omg, I'm so excited!!! You really know how to leave an awesome, juicy cliffhanger!! ^_~ Not the kind that make you mad, the kind that make you happy.
I'm loving your story so far! I cannot WAIT until you can get another chapter up! You write extremely well!

I hope your computer problems resolve. XD I'm honestly like bouncing up and down in my chair.
person shiden
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
id love it if you could update soon, it was a real good beginning.