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by Jazzkat

schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so utterly heart breaking and sweet at the same time... I'm dying to know if she will talk to him about how she feels... they interact so naturally together... just like old times... some bitterness among them now, but I do hope they will work things out. It's so angsty, I love it!
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schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You weren't lying when you said this was an angsty story. I'm really getting into this, and I look forward to future chapters.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Leah's and Hal's story is so heart breaking! I feel so sorry for them... no doubt why they still behave like that... but I cannot wait to see both their reactions during the talk... Keeping my fingers crossed for both of them... they are so right for each other...
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is really frustrating... I just have to find out what happened between them. I do have something in mind, but I'm not sure yet. The fact that Hal asked Leah's help is a huge step!!!
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're both so afraid of what might happen when they have that dreadful talk...
I'm curious to see how Hal will handle it and if he will be the one to ask for her help first, once out of the hospital.
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You mentioned something about a loss they both suffered from... was it a baby? That is so sad... I can understand where they come from now and Hal's pain and moody character... it must be so difficult for both of them right now...
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where do you get all these brilliant ideas? I love your new one, really... it sounds very promising, angsty and dark. Thumbs up from me!!! :)