rate_review Reviews

This story has captured me in so many ways. It is written in one of the most beautiful ways I've ever read, the only other being a very popular published writer renouned for her skills in description and story telling. I read this story and I am filled with inspiration. I feel emotionally linked with the characters and cant bring myself to dislike any of them. This story has definitely changed my outlook on writing and I hope to reach its level one day to be able to enrapture all who read my work as you have done to me with this story. I am anxiously awaiting new installments to the story and will probably read it over and again because I dont think I'll be able to pull myself away from it for long. Thank you for writing this beautiful story and sharing it with everyone.

I have fallen in love with this story. The writing style is beautiful. The characters have come to life for me and i can't wait to read what happens next. I have been reading stories on this site for a long time and none of them have gotten to me quite like this. Please continue this lovely story.

Teehee! I registered here just to be sure I could keep up with Nymphaea! No more worries about aarin being down.

Hi, Ele,
Don't be too upset about reviews; it's been my observation that sometimes top fics don't get many reviews. Why-I'd never know, but it's a fact. I think that people get intimidated by good writers, hehe. This story is very interesting and seductive, the plot is well developed, looks like publishable quality to me (although, I am not an expert.) I was going to put it on Golden Nuggets list, which is the list of my favorite AFF Slash Fiction. I was a bit surprised about a way chapters are being added onto; 1.1 1.2 and so on. I missed some bits because of it before. Good thing that you put that info into summary :)

About rule 20: we had some people doing dosens of 'edits' a day, constantly pushing their fic up. A bit too much, sadly.

I didn't mean it like that. I know what you have to do. I understand the reason you write what you do when you do. I was just pointing out my disapointment at the time. I know that you'll explain whats going on. You also update offten(which I thank you for by the way) so I wasn't worried about it. Sorry

Still didn't say what Avey is up to.

Okay I went from Yay to what the fuck in .2 seconds. You always seem to do that and its EVIL. I'm begining to think you like torturing your readers.

Didn't know what my last review was for a second. Anyway Stephen does seem more determined to get what he wants. Which is good but I sort of liked the carefree side of him. Oh well we all must grow up some time. Great chapter!

Lissy is a very...diferent child.

Thanks for the age. I'm worried, whats going to be on the news?