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for Eat You Up

by MakaiKitty

person azinine
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Just wanna say to you how much I love your fics... *snicker* Though this one top it all. I have been both angst-ridden and amused by this fic. *giggle* And the happy ending is so much of the good. Though... forgive me if I offend, making love on your Grandmother's bed with the rotting corpse of the Wolf not far from you just tickled my funny bone once it had actually registered to me after I reread the ending.... XDDD Hope you don't mind and please don't get offended by this review cause in all honesty I DO like all your fics. I'm a sucker for Slash with a Happily Ever After. ^__^ But the ending of this..... *lol* Peace! (^_^v)
person kajamiku
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I assure you, I will be going back to read your other fairytales and everything else I've missed when I can. Illness has sadly limited my days to watching anime and sleeping, reading just requires too much concentration most of the time. However, in the meantime...

I rather liked this. Very nice adaptation; I love the first paragraph and this line -

"You're not a slut," Anthony scolded, "you're just exceedingly friendly."

- I will be using myself in future XDD I did worry/laugh a little about the fact that the huntsman is ravishing Red on his dead Grandmother's bed with a dead wolf lying not feet from them though LOL But all in all I quite like it, good job! *trots off to read more*

Kaja